Hello, I'm a first-time-chess-player, can you please put your eyes here and tell me what are my good moves and what are my bad moves.

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Hello Huy Nguyen,

I can understand that having joined this site, you want to improve as quickly as possible. However, it is bad sportsmanship to discuss games in progress, even if they are unrated. As far as I know, the rules of this site even forbid this explicitly.

greetz,

Torkil

I think 9.Ba4 is not as good as 9.Bxc6 because after your bishop is taken on c6 you have 10. e5.

post again when the game's over and tell skyjoe.... i have more advice for black than white on this opening.

There is much you could improve about your opening, but Torkil is right -- you can't solicit advice while the game is in progress.  Let us know when the game is over, and we'll be happy to discuss what you could have done better.

Thank you for all of your replies.

It's alright, but after 1.d4 then d5, I like playing Bg5, Nc3, or c4.