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12th May 2008, 06:18pm
#1
by chessdadx2
Toledo,Ohio United States
Member Since: Dec 2007
Member Points: 191

This is a game I was doing well in despite a couple of blunders.  I was doing well into the middlegame then my game went south, any insight is appreciated.

 

 


12th May 2008, 06:27pm
#2
by sugarcraft42
Toronto Canada
Member Since: Dec 2007
Member Points: 19

i think by retreating your queen you lose alot of tempo.

I believe it is strong to play Qa4 and sometimes Qd3 is strong as well.

I may be wrong.


12th May 2008, 06:37pm
#3
by defenders50
New York United States
Member Since: Nov 2007
Member Points: 4

Retreating the queen is questionable.

 

Also, you lost your center pawns pretty quickly. You probably moved the wrong knight on the 6th move (in a hurry to castle)? Once he grabbed control of the center, he just slowly took over everything else.


12th May 2008, 06:37pm
#4
by redandblack
United States
Member Since: Feb 2008
Member Points: 18

Aight, first thing you need to do (I'm guessing this wasn't a blitz game) is to take your time and look around for each move. Think about the position: "Can I take that piece?" "Who is defending it?" "What will happen after I move here?" etc. Watch the entire board, as there could be a piece on the side that you didn't notice. Even when your oppenent seems to have blundered, there may be a trap.

In the opening, watch out for moves that will get your queen out too early, unless it is worth it.  Consider the pros and cons. For instance, when you played 3. Qxd4, there was no need (after 1. e4 c5, you could have played 2. Nf3, preparing to play d4 later). This doesn't mean that you should never bring out the queen in the opening. For instance, after 6... Nxe4, you could have played 7. Qd5, both threatening to take f7 (which would be checkmate) and threatening to take the knight. After 7... Nd6, defending from both threats, you would have been able to take the e5 pawn with your knight, thus reclaiming the center.

Other than this, the only other advice for improving that I can give you is: practice.


12th May 2008, 06:51pm
#5
by Jambux_Josh
Garden Grove, Ca United States
Member Since: Feb 2008
Member Points: 118
it isnt wise to bring out your queen so early. move 6. Nc3 would be better.  it guards the pawn and helps control the d5 square. i think 8. Qe1 was too slow. you should continue to develop. when you are behind, it is best not to simplify by trading exchanges. 13. Na4 forks the queen and bishop and then wins the bishop after the queen retreats. maybe even Nd5 to force the knight off f6, followed by Bxh7. after move 21 you should have focused on trapping the king as you were close to mate and he was in the corner. keep practicing.
12th May 2008, 11:34pm
#6
by NM tonydal
United States
Member Since: Oct 2007
Member Points: 615
Actually, 8 Qd5 would win a piece (8... Nd6 9 Qxc5).
7th June 2008, 09:37pm
#7
by donn_gee
Philippines
Member Since: May 2008
Member Points: 173
wow! king hunt pretty impressive huh!Cool
 

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