I would say advancing your king pawns in order to win a piece is fine, as long as you can get enough defenders over to protect your king. Looks similar to the noah's ark trap, on the opposite side of the board.
I think you should have taken with your rook on 29, keeping your queen near your king, which is fine on the diagonal with no potential bishop pins.
Then I think you just need to get the pieces off the board asap, you should be winning.
Hi,
here is a game i recently played, I believe i played well but i lost due to an unavoidable mate. ( i cant believe i didnt see it).
I have lightly annotated it as i havent got much time. Any suggestions on mistakes/ improving my game would be great. Thanks