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4th January 2008, 10:49am
#1
by ciraxis
Right Here United States
Member Since: Dec 2007
Member Points: 56

I've been going over this game I played.  I would just like any comments please, I made a good number of blunders in the beginning.  I'm trying to review my games and learn from them.  Thanks

 

 












here is a second game
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
a third
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
and a fourth,  thanks you guys for any advice
 
 

4th January 2008, 11:10am
#2
by Daemon_Panda
Coconut Grove , Fl United States
Member Since: Jun 2007
Member Points: 1043
You won in the end but your pawn structure was really weak, I'm suprised black never took advantage. The knight fork could have been seen two moves before and prevented.
4th January 2008, 11:28am
#3
by ciraxis
Right Here United States
Member Since: Dec 2007
Member Points: 56
thanks, i didn't think I was going to win.  I was kicking myself for not looking for the fork.  I have been having trouble with my pawns and the end game.  
4th January 2008, 01:12pm
#4
by Cedochess
Belgium
Member Since: Dec 2007
Member Points: 5

Yes, there are a few mistakes. Here is one. 

In the first game 37. Qc4 is a checkmate.

And your pawn structure is not really "beautiful" ... 


4th January 2008, 01:37pm
#5
by Loomis
Durham, NC United States
Member Since: Oct 2007
Member Points: 3112

In the first game,

13. Be3 loses a pawn. 

17. c5. You could have played Nxd4 winning a piece. 

22. Qxg7. You could have played Rd1 skewering the queen. 

 

In the 3rd game,

10. Nb5. This is just asking for trouble. You voluntarily allow yourself to have a pinned knight that is attacked by a pawn. It's only a matter of time before black wins it.

27. Nc6 allows black to take your rook. 

43. Bc4. You could have won with 43. Kh4. You must promote your pawn, trading it leads to a draw. 

 

I looks like you still need to work on simple tactics. Don't lose pieces so easily and don't fail to win pieces from your opponent when they are given up easily.


4th January 2008, 04:16pm
#6
by LDSSDL
Tinton Falls United States
Member Since: Dec 2007
Member Points: 180
Study opening theory as well. Your pawn structure that you used in every single game with the e, d, and c pawns is really weak and leaves a number of holes in your position that allow your opponent to do bad things to you. Learn openings so that your position is much more solid, and your opponent will have alot fewer options against you.
 
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