I played this recently and enjoyed it, I hope you do to

Any comments and suggestions are accepted 

i like the queen trade u did, lol

dramtic effect. 

only thing... i see your game and she capture your b-pawn.

You mean the g pawn

and yea he did but i didn't put it in case people thought that he could catch my pawn with his king

either way, same effect 

Heh cute.

Nothting to suggest really. There are dozens of different ways for the queen to beat the bishop and pawn from the starting position you gave. It's actually hard to think of a reasonable plan that doesn't win...

But it's a cute finish.