I am trying to take my play to the next level by analyzing games move by move.  This is my first attempt, and I would appreciate some feedback on the accuracy (or inaccuracy) of this analysis.

Its good I must admit, but often there is more to a move than "develops the bishop". Is he collecting pressure on one point? Is he limiting movement of the opposing pieces? Is he gathering an attack? Is he actually doing a move to defend himself?

Thank you for your feedback.  I see your point.  I need to be more thorough about the details of the move, and avoid just being content to point out the obvious.