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8th March 2009, 01:27pm
#1
by Misiaczek_96
Woonsocket,RI Poland
Member Since: Feb 2009
Member Points: 94

Can someone go through both my live and online games and examine them. Otherwords give me a thorough analysis lol. I want to know what im doin wrong

8th March 2009, 05:23pm
#2
by SteveM
Who Cares United States
Member Since: Jan 2008
Member Points: 1438

There is computer analysis available.  I'm not sure if you have to be a premium member (or better)  to use it.

9th March 2009, 03:55am
#3
by kco
Perth Australia
Member Since: Jun 2008
Member Points: 23225

Post some of your games here. So we can have a look at it.

9th March 2009, 04:10am
#4
by Ian_Sinclair
Australia
Member Since: Dec 2007
Member Points: 3064

Your turn based games show me; 1.) u dont develop properly or with enough purpose when u do. Random development doesnt help ur cause and bring out ur pawns without proper support from ur pieces leave us in dangerous positions.

2.) You dont take enough time to look at what ur opponents doing or if anything can be taken from u by their pieces.

3.)Dont play ur queen to much ur not giving ur pieces and pawn structure enough chance to be effective for u. Dont play 2 pawns in the center if one is already there while ur still a beginner. Get ur pieces into play and ur king castled safely.

I hope all this helps you. Remember to look before u leap and get all ur men out into battle or most before u attack to much, also makes ur defences better too.

9th March 2009, 04:06pm
#5
by Misiaczek_96
Woonsocket,RI Poland
Member Since: Feb 2009
Member Points: 94
Ian_Sinclair wrote:

Your turn based games show me; 1.) u dont develop properly or with enough purpose when u do. Random development doesnt help ur cause and bring out ur pawns without proper support from ur pieces leave us in dangerous positions.

2.) You dont take enough time to look at what ur opponents doing or if anything can be taken from u by their pieces.

3.)Dont play ur queen to much ur not giving ur pieces and pawn structure enough chance to be effective for u. Dont play 2 pawns in the center if one is already there while ur still a beginner. Get ur pieces into play and ur king castled safely.

I hope all this helps you. Remember to look before u leap and get all ur men out into battle or most before u attack to much, also makes ur defences better too.


oh yeah i forgot to mention that my turn based games are horrible because i rush. Could u also look at my live chess games (the only reason i hate online is because i cant focus on one game but on more than 5 or 10)

9th March 2009, 04:08pm
#6
by Misiaczek_96
Woonsocket,RI Poland
Member Since: Feb 2009
Member Points: 94
kco wrote:

Post some of your games here. So we can have a look at it.


can u pls tell me how to post games so they can move???

9th March 2009, 04:37pm
#7
by Ian_Sinclair
Australia
Member Since: Dec 2007
Member Points: 3064

If your having trouble focussing on the screen why don't u try using a real chess set and play ur games with that to aid u. If ur moving to fast and not concentrating then that's y ur losing so often. Your live games are much the same mate ur not looking at what ur opponents are doing, to busy trying to get ur own attack in i imagine.

To post ur games u can either copy and past the link and us click on it and so on. Or u can click on the chess board icon above and follow the instructions.

 
9th March 2009, 07:32pm
#8
by Misiaczek_96
Woonsocket,RI Poland
Member Since: Feb 2009
Member Points: 94
Ian_Sinclair wrote:

If your having trouble focussing on the screen why don't u try using a real chess set and play ur games with that to aid u. If ur moving to fast and not concentrating then that's y ur losing so often. Your live games are much the same mate ur not looking at what ur opponents are doing, to busy trying to get ur own attack in i imagine.

To post ur games u can either copy and past the link and us click on it and so on. Or u can click on the chess board icon above and follow the instructions.

 

what board lol? i meant changin focus from game to game instead of focusing on just one game at a time. i hate doin that because i dont remeber what i was thinking a week ago and im really unorganized

9th March 2009, 07:37pm
#9
by Ian_Sinclair
Australia
Member Since: Dec 2007
Member Points: 3064

The board is above, it looks like a wooden chess board on ur tool bar where ur bold and spell check, all of that is. Take notes of the moves u liked and the follow up plan u had and write them down so u do remember what u was upto. Cant do much about the live chess in this regard though. You want to improve u better learn to focuss.Smile There is not easy solutions to being good at this game or anything else in life just hard work/study plus playing ur games and learning from them which takes time and dedication.

9th March 2009, 07:53pm
#10
by Misiaczek_96
Woonsocket,RI Poland
Member Since: Feb 2009
Member Points: 94

i think i got it

9th March 2009, 07:54pm
#11
by Misiaczek_96
Woonsocket,RI Poland
Member Since: Feb 2009
Member Points: 94

this was one of my worst game against as u can see a way better player. comments?

9th March 2009, 08:04pm
#12
by sebas4life
utrecht Netherlands
Member Since: Dec 2008
Member Points: 333

comments? allright, 


Why don't you ask yourself the purpose of your opponents move? If you've done that you wouldn't have blundered away the Q

9th March 2009, 08:06pm
#13
by Eniamar
Fairfield, OH United States
Member Since: Mar 2008
Member Points: 682

Up to move 7 you play a fine sicilian Najdorf.

on 7.e5 I cringed a little, you give up your whole pawn center with check! better was Bd3 or Be2 to develop your bishops(personally I'd have considered Be2 for speedy castling)

perhaps 9.Nde2 wasn't the best way to block the check. Be2 seems much better because it develops a piece and doesn't allow the nasty pin that occurs.

10. h3 is a bit more accurate, but black missed Qf5 as a reply anyway.

14. Bxf6 perhaps 0-0-0 first and black could potentially waste a tempo on h6 here.

16. Ng3?? clearly you saw this afterward but it's the biggie.

by the way, 17. Qxg5 is better than the knight tour since he can simply take Bxf5 and your queen is still dead.

After that you were pushing your pieces towards the kingside when it was necessary to centralize them or bring over to the queenside for defense.

9th March 2009, 08:08pm
#14
by Ian_Sinclair
Australia
Member Since: Dec 2007
Member Points: 3064

My previous comments above still stand. Glad to see u worked the board out.

7.e5? bad move better was to develop ( Be2 is best) 9.Be2 was still better choice ur knight moving there just blocked everything in. 15.Kh1 was needed .

10th March 2009, 03:44pm
#15
by Misiaczek_96
Woonsocket,RI Poland
Member Since: Feb 2009
Member Points: 94

ty guys i might post some games later but first i actually got to play a few

10th March 2009, 03:50pm
#16
by Misiaczek_96
Woonsocket,RI Poland
Member Since: Feb 2009
Member Points: 94

i was wonderin is this the right way to play the kings indian

10th March 2009, 04:49pm
#17
by kco
Perth Australia
Member Since: Jun 2008
Member Points: 23225

!.Nf3 is called the Zukertort (or Reti) Opening but is can be tranpose into other opening, KID is one of them.

King Indian start like this 1.d4  Nf6   2.c4  g6  3.Nc3

14th April 2009, 08:16am
#18
by Misiaczek_96
Woonsocket,RI Poland
Member Since: Feb 2009
Member Points: 94

can u guys tell me who has the upperhand here. pls dont give me any continuation s but who is doin a better job

14th April 2009, 08:23am
#19
by Misiaczek_96
Woonsocket,RI Poland
Member Since: Feb 2009
Member Points: 94
ChessKitty wrote:
Misiaczek_96 wrote:

can u guys tell me who has the upperhand here. pls dont give me any continuation s but who is doin a better job

 


At a glance I'd say white has the advantage


do u think black made a good trade?

14th April 2009, 09:49am
#20
by Misiaczek_96
Woonsocket,RI Poland
Member Since: Feb 2009
Member Points: 94

me too:D

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