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  • 17 months ago · Quote · #801

    learnateverygame

    wow I didn't see Ne5 at all ! I think that he was feeling the pressure and can't find the best move, in which sometimes I do fail to find one Wink

    @kco well I annotate by heart Tongue out, but if it is an important game, I will go over it slowly, to find is there something I could uncover.

  • 17 months ago · Quote · #802

    Zelenkooo

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  • 17 months ago · Quote · #803

    Yosriv

    The problem is that amateurs (like me, for example) post their games but their games are not considered worthy of analysis by strong players. I posted a game and no one commented a single move of it. So it's useless; fortunately, chess engines still exist.

  • 17 months ago · Quote · #804

    who_dat

    This is my first game of a local 7 round tournament that I'm taking part these days.It happened to be a win,but I promise I'll post my future losses as well.There's only the rating of my opponent since I have started to play in official tournaments recently and I'm still unrated.My comments are not the result of an analysis,but my thoughts during the game.

  • 17 months ago · Quote · #805

    cornedbeefhashvili

    Here is my donation. I was last active about 2 years ago. This is a G/30. I lost this game, but I liked the way I handled most of the game.

  • 17 months ago · Quote · #806

    learnateverygame

    @who that was a nice game :)

    I think your opponent can take advantage of the isolated pawn (a4), but if he catches up in development, that pawn is going to fall in the long run, but hey, I know that your opponent loses, because he thinks he was playing an unrated player.

    When I had my first international tournament, I was playing in U2000 section, there are lots of 1400-1600 there, and I scored pretty well against them Wink

    good luck with the tournament !

     

    @cornedbeef : at least you survived playing an IM, last time I played against FM in rapid, I didn't do so good.

    -0,88 and you have the advantage Surprised, with your e pawn ready to promote, for me, I would play 35.... Qf2,prepping e3, as his pawn islands I think are too vulnerable to attack, and your pawn island is ok, if you had more time, you had real chances to win against IM !

  • 17 months ago · Quote · #807

    learnateverygame

    The games that I played yesterday.. Most of them are lost because of time pressure and lack of concentration lol.

    feedbacks are appreciated !
  • 17 months ago · Quote · #808

    GIex

    Yosriv wrote:

    The problem is that amateurs (like me, for example) post their games but their games are not considered worthy of analysis by strong players. I posted a game and no one commented a single move of it. So it's useless; fortunately, chess engines still exist.


    Every game is worth analyzing. In chess, there are no two identical games (at least in most of the cases), so every new one is a challenge to both play and analyze.

    But the main purpose of this topic is to show the player's (author's) thoughts, both during the game and from consequent analysis. In this way, when someone looks at the game, he'll be able to see the reasoning behind the moves, and chances are he'll be able to get more involved into the game. From then on, if he likes some idea or spots a better option somewhere, he's likely to write that as feedback to the author's analysis.

    But the main purpose is to practice self-annotating, and thereby practice positional evaluation and variations calculation - in other words, practice your own chess reasoning. That's what a computer won't be able to help with, neither will another player be. The purpose of self-annotating is to gain experience, to spot your mistakes, to check whether what you thought was a good idea will post-mortem turn out to be really as good as it seemed to be. In other words, getting a more thorough look at a particular game, and at your chess skills in general, than a game time control allows you to.

    (By the way, I had a look at the thread but I couldn't find your game. Maybe you have posted in another forum. I believe if you annotate a game and post it here, at least one other user will reply. If noone replies though, as there are so many games and it's hard to reply to all, you'll at least have the benefit of doing the analysis, and that's not less important than getting a feedback. At the moment you have your game annotated and prepare to click the "Submit" button, you should have already gained some knowledge or experience, and you should be able to sense that yourself at that point, no matter whether someone will later reply or not.)

  • 17 months ago · Quote · #809

    hrb264

    Although I lost this game lol, I think I did quite well defending (although I lost it a bit towards the end), since it took 68 moves for him to checkmate me. What stopped me getting a draw is allowing my bishop to be separated from the king (you'll see what I mean).

  • 17 months ago · Quote · #810

    epiphonepunk07

    Game from fics. im rated about 1100 blitz 1300 standard on chess.com. would love to hear if i missed anything
  • 17 months ago · Quote · #811

    learnateverygame

    @hrb : your game is alright, and you need to polish up your tactical and calculation skills lol, as all of us will and have to.

     

    @epi : that game is a nice one, you could see how GMs play in caro kann, maybe you could see some ideas that give you an edge, as your favourite is caro.

  • 17 months ago · Quote · #812

    hrb264

    yes there's one thing i've noticed i'm crap at seeing several moves ahead and calculating the different variations. i've been wondering recently if i should just give up :facepalm: :D 

  • 17 months ago · Quote · #813

    GIex

    hrb264 wrote:

    Although I lost this game lol, I think I did quite well defending (although I lost it a bit towards the end), since it took 68 moves for him to checkmate me. What stopped me getting a draw is allowing my bishop to be separated from the king (you'll see what I mean).


    In the opening, you could have used less moves to develop your pieces. As you said, 3...Be6 is not very good because the bishop has nothing to attack from there while it blocks the e pawn, and you could have played 3...Bg4 as you suggested, you could have also played 3...dxe4. White missed 5.c4, that could have won a tempo on the bishop. On moves 5 and 7 you move your queen twice, while your king's bishop is still not developed. At move 8 White has developed all of his minor pieces and has castled, that's why he had an advantage.

    But the bishop for knight exchanges he made spoiled it, as he lost tempi to exchange well placed pieces, and allowed you to increase your center control with ...gxf6, getting a semi-open g file and development options for your bishop along the f8-h6 diagonal. He could have played 9.c4 for example, and he would have had a much better game. 12.c5 was also not a very good move, because it weakened White's light squares.

    You could have continued with 12...Bh6, as the bishop would have been much more active on the h6-c1 diagonal. Then you could have played ...Rhg8 to get the g file, and you would have had a good attack on White's kingside.

    15...f5 weakened d5 and g5, that's why you could have omitted it. You could have played 15...e5 to attack White's d4 pawn and free d6 for the queen.

    After 16.Neg5 (which is a mistake, as it loses tempi for White) you could have continued 16...f6 17.Nh6 d5, and have a good position (17.Nxh7 would have led to 17...Rh8, winning the knight; 17.Nf7 is met with 17...Rd7). But you misplayed the following few moves tactically (including, for example, 22...Rxc5 instead of 22...R5d4; 26...Re4 instead of 26...Kc6, and some of the following moves), so White gained material advantage and had a fine game.

    As a whole, maybe your weakness in this game was really the short-term calculation, as you made some moves that let White immediately gain advantage, while you skipped other good moves that would have done the opposite Laughing And also the not quick enough development and central pressure in the opening, and some not so good development choices for your pieces.

     

    epiphonepunk07 wrote:
    Game from fics. im rated about 1100 blitz 1300 standard on chess.com. would love to hear if i missed anything

    I also play similar pawn structures, that's why I got interested in the opening. The idea of 7...e6 is really a bit strange for Black, maybe there's some refutation. After 10...h6 it's a common position though, so both lines may turn out to be transposable.

    You and your opponent played well in the opening and had good middlegame plans. You - for kingside play based on the e5 square, your opponent - for queenside activity. You played very well strategically, and when Black made a mistake with 21...Rxd7 you got a won game, and what's not less important, you managed to turn it into a win.

    You had very good central control, you activated and used all of your pieces, and did that before Black has fully developed.

    After move 14, you had castled and had one more piece developed. Maybe Black should have avoided 15...Nxe5 in favor of 15...Be7, or 16...Ng4 in favor of 16...Be7. He let you have the d file before he has castled, so you afterwards got the 7th rank too.

    Because of that, you practically had a material advantage even more than the won pawn, and you got a very good position too with a pawn on the 6th rank and a rook on the 7th. You had a good plan and executed it well. You played very accurately for the whole game, so you deservedly won Laughing

  • 17 months ago · Quote · #814

    theweaponking

    Hey Glex.  Check my post up there if you haven't already.

  • 17 months ago · Quote · #815

    hrb264

    thanks glex, and you're right, i'm really not good at the short term calculation stuff. not really sure how i can improve this?

  • 17 months ago · Quote · #816

    drakethatsme

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  • 17 months ago · Quote · #817

    Rayminosorous

    I think Epi's game was very well played by him especially considering he gave himself a rating of only 945

  • 17 months ago · Quote · #818

    marcocasino

    Hi 

    I just started a chess channel on you tube and would love to share some of my live chess games and get some feedback.

    heres my first video

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UIzGatHhlGE&list=UUE3LfMvrt4N_CBvyidERhjA&index=1&feature=plcp

    Would love to build a community where we can share each others videos and comment on them.... 

     

  • 17 months ago · Quote · #819

    GIex

    theweaponking wrote:

    Hey Glex.  Check my post up there if you haven't already.


    I have seen it Laughing Those are interesting games, but unfortunately they're too many to comment on (16 if I'm not mistaken) Laughing You played well in all of them.

    I remember some of your earlier games too. I think you have a good developed opening repertoire which is also not very common, and it helps you to have good middlegame positions which are often not expected by your opponent. You play well tactically too, so once you have good opening and middlegame play what you have to do is work on the endgame Laughing The games you have posted end in the middlegame or in the very early endgame, so in them (save for 1 I think) there was practically no endgame Laughing It's good if you are able to win in the middlegame, you should do it if it's possible (early Kramnik preferred to jump into the endgame, where he was and is a machine, and he was criticised on that), but you should be prepared to play an equal endgame. I think you can do it, but just as a note because I haven't seen it Laughing

  • 17 months ago · Quote · #820

    marcocasino

    http://youtu.be/UIzGatHhlGE

     

     analysis and help greatly appreciated.


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