I was playing a friend at chess and this was our game. None of use are particularly amazing. I was just wondering if someone could please make comments on both of our moves.

Thanks for making the remarks, it looks like both of us gave away pieces, and made lots of uneeded wasteful moves.

i suggest playing a lot and paying more attention to games, and work on your tactics mainly. Once you get to the point where you dont hang material much, then you can start looking at more strategical stuff like some of the other things i was pointing out

I will for sure try and play more games. Do you have a reccomendation as to how many I should try and play each week?

I'd say about 70% of your chess time should be playing games