Love Story

Author: Ian Pires

There once was a heart that was broken,
Cast aside as a useless token,
Slashed, mashed and torn asunder,
Destroyed by one faithless blunder.

Across a dark room eyes wander until gazes stuck,
Two souls brought together by fate and luck,
Lustful thoughts at moments glance,
Heart aflutter as I watch you dance.

A breath of life gently blown into my stillborn chest,
To awaken a love I would never have guessed,
Like a kiss of heaven brought on moon and stars,
So unlikely with you from Venus and I from Mars.

Oh, this passion burns me deep,
With these pleasures I can never sleep,
Why waste to dream when my dream is real,
For with your love my heart you did heal.

Even if our souls are painfully apart,
Without doubt you have my heart,
This gift I give with latitude,
To express my undying gratitude.

^_^ I really like this poem. ^_^

simply superb.....:-)

that is nice

Very nice..What is it with you and poetry? sigh.... haha ^_^

I love them..It's fun ^_^

nyc poetry!

I'll have to remember that one for the next time I try to serenade the Mrs. whilst under the influence.  I'm sure it is a step up from "we are sailing".

great poem i used to right poems my self i was pretty good but i decided people would think i was gay so i stopped lol.

Writing poems (for boys) is not gay... okay, it depends..

However, I found most girls (that I know) are attracted towards boys who could write a poem or a song.

Weird......

Much more towards Super-Rich Guys, don't you think so?

It depends...

On what?

Complete "It Depends......."

Wonderful peom; my poems always end up with someone being eaten my zombies, I'm so cheerful.

 I'm not sure if I want to complete that. Lol

Being eaten by zombies, you mean..

WHY NOT COMPLETE IT, AGAINST ME?

TRUTH PLEASE!

No thanx... I'm rather secretive. Haha.

I hope its not against me.

No, not so against you. Heck, I don't even understand what you said!

If it is

Then...............

Won't tell you, as i too keep secret, big ONES!