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13th October 2009, 05:09pm
#1
by THE_GRIMACE
youngstown, ohio United States
Member Since: Jun 2009
Member Points: 4399

about 9-11

 

a day remembered

burned into our minds

the victims all innocent

all races all kinds

the towers are falling

with dust in the air

they had done nothing wrong

it just wasn't fair

tears hit the ground

as people all stared

families running

with children all scared

all for no reason

they had done nothing wrong

the people united

and sang song after song

we all stood up

people screamed to the skies

everywhere people mourned

all with tears in their eyes

the flags were adourned

we showed our true colors

we were injured not killed

on that horrible day

 much blood had been spilled

murder and death

but no reason in sight

why did this happen

it just isn't right!

it won't happen again it just will not fit

we will always remember

we will never forget.

 

 

a project for history.

THROUGH THE EYES OF A SOLDIER

as fires burn

the sky turns red

muskets ring

and more fall dead

men scream in pain

and blood hits the ground

its hell on earth

and theres death all around

dirt turns to mud

as it starts to rain

but cannons keep firing

men still go insane

most of us will die

and as day turns to night

we feel death upon us

but we continue to fight

The sun rises again

the armies cease firing

there isn't a sound

the battle is over

we now see the sun

so many lay dead

but no army has won

we get back to camp

and we gather our gear

no sleep for us today

for the next battle is near

we are not afraid

because we know we will die

when people look back a whole country shall cry

 

we see people die, day after day

we are ordered around but have nothing to say

its kill or be killed its burned into our head

you pull the trigger nothing needs to be said

none of us our afraid we know we will die

we know what will happen, and theres no need to lie

our friends are all gone

we all here the tired sighs

its just a soldiers life seen through a soldiers eyes.

BY  MIKE

please comment.

13th October 2009, 05:37pm
#2
by Hadi_Ati
Perak in Heaven Malaysia
Member Since: Jan 2009
Member Points: 3167

I like it..kinda sad knowing that life's like that..

14th October 2009, 08:27am
#3
by snprook
The other side of the computer screen United States
Member Since: May 2009
Member Points: 1603

"we will always forget"

?!?

14th October 2009, 04:55pm
#4
by Celecity
United States
Member Since: Nov 2008
Member Points: 3514

you should change "we will always forget" to "we will never forget" since no one will really forget 9/11. nice poems though ^_^

18th October 2009, 04:28pm
#5
by THE_GRIMACE
youngstown, ohio United States
Member Since: Jun 2009
Member Points: 4399

lol, oops.

4th November 2009, 08:49pm
#6
by dnleary
Hobart Australia
Member Since: May 2008
Member Points: 3415

i like we will always forget better

 

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