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poem 9


  • 3 years ago · Quote · #1

    CupcakewithSprinkles

     
    Gone

    Every moment passing, I knew something ,
    Something that you wanted to say,
    You wanted me to leave ,
    you never wanted me to stay,

    What kept me there , I still don't know ,
    Something missing , just my soul,
    Tears run bare , like a river running loose ,
    Go away from me , just hang me by the noose

    You go , but I didn't want that ,
    your supposed to stay , can't you see that ?
    Everything wrong ,
    everything's wrong with me

    Time's are passing ,
    but your still thick at heart ,
    But now I come back ,
    Thing I like these I should never start

    Kill me , with a sword or knife,
    That I could bare,
    But talk to me though,
    But you don't ,I just wish I can't care

    An ocean deep of love ,
    I still have for you ,
    But now its gone ,
    So have you

    by Phavi Kannan

  • 3 years ago · Quote · #2

    RedSoxpawn

    that was fast

  • 3 years ago · Quote · #3

    RedSoxpawn

    you gotta start making a few cheerful poems somewhere, even though these are wonderful. your gonna make me emo, which I hate haha

  • 3 years ago · Quote · #4

    CupcakewithSprinkles

    I can't sadly :(

  • 3 years ago · Quote · #5

    RedSoxpawn

    Think about good times. or you will get tired of this life and end up souless.

  • 3 years ago · Quote · #6

    THE_GRIMACE

    ur poems r wonderful, but we need to lighten them up. Cry too sad.

  • 3 years ago · Quote · #7

    Heejo

    i've got the feeling you cried your heart out girl, how are you?

  • 3 years ago · Quote · #8

    RedSoxpawn

    I know

  • 3 years ago · Quote · #9

    Gerik

    She depicts life as it is. It's just being realistic. And by the way, yet another great poem.

  • 3 years ago · Quote · #10

    RedSoxpawn

    I know that also

  • 3 years ago · Quote · #11

    Heejo

    yes but i know that she cried i can feel it..

  • 3 years ago · Quote · #12

    CupcakewithSprinkles

    well I was crying , and now too , and no one can make me stop

  • 3 years ago · Quote · #13

    THE_GRIMACE

    let it out, we all love u here.

  • 3 years ago · Quote · #14

    RedSoxpawn

    if only I could. I will tell you this, you need to lighten up on yourself you are thinking to high in the clouds for the moment. already you have done more then many people ever do, just moving across the pond is enough by itself

  • 3 years ago · Quote · #15

    Heejo

    *sigh* i bet some1 can

  • 3 years ago · Quote · #16

    RedSoxpawn

    yeah, well somebody is not there for her, and they need to be. If I ever find out who put so much sadness into her life, I swear they will meet a sadness that makes hers look like a heaven

  • 3 years ago · Quote · #17

    Heejo

    i just wonder what's going on in her life that make sher feel like this..

  • 3 years ago · Quote · #18

    RedSoxpawn

    It's something deep inside on a level that we can't understand, and probably never will. I almost feel sorry for whomever she goes off in life with, they will have to learn to adapt to this girl and love her for who she really is deep inside not how she is on the top

  • 3 years ago · Quote · #19

    Heejo

    i will try to come to an understanding and crack open this girl knowing what is going on in her mind i just want to see if i can do something for her

  • 3 years ago · Quote · #20

    RedSoxpawn

    I would love to actually do something for her also, but First I have to do the same thing as you


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