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7th December 2008, 08:51pm
#1
by Catherine-J
New York City United States
Member Since: Aug 2008
Member Points: 307

Flourescence glares down upon my

closed eyelids

            wrapped in an iron shroud of

     light blockers beckens underneath my

            mausoleum        of

                the     mindless

in transit - motioning what's left

     of my sanity unchecked

 into pockets unlit by the rays

From artificial tubes wrapped in plastic

   flickering humming

            hummdrumming

my closed eye slumber further

   into

      the pace of the murmur

   of the lights

            singing       just right

22nd December 2008, 08:28am
#2
by Catherine-J
New York City United States
Member Since: Aug 2008
Member Points: 307

thanks!

28th December 2008, 11:42am
#3
by lostapiece
mercia England
Member Since: Aug 2007
Member Points: 6165

wow .. your deep (just backtracking your work now:)

 

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