Please don't take my comments as that I don't like the pics.  It was a great shoot.  I'm just trying to give you my feel on them from the gut as a fellow photographer.  Little things that may take  your good pictures a step better and make them great. It's all in my eyes of course and subject to contrary views. When in college, I would have open critiques with friends many times and found it helpful when it didnt' devastate me...lol.  We were truly brutal with each other, to a fault.  As you know the quality of your work lies in the eye of the beholder.  I can see yours is certainly quality.  Read and please delete all comments at will please.   Would love to see your next shoot, maybe I'll post something more than my snapshots and give you a shot at me. :}

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