POETRY in COLOR

Submitted by gram77x on Sun, 09/07/2008 at 11:59am.

 
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by gram77x - 15 months ago
Maryland United States
Member Since: Jan 2008
Member Points: 89

My passion is writting and sharing my poetry.

This my first attempt at transporting an image to this site, so bear with me. The poem above is titled,

                               Relections

                    I see you as I see myself

                      I feel your heart when you touch me,

                     I laugh you laugh

                                             You cry I cry

                    When you are happy, I am happy

                    When you are sad, I am sad

                 

                  I see you -Inside of me

                 I can see me inside of you...

                As we grow together and become one.

             Silience, Shhh, be still

                           I hear your heartbeat, beat

                           Your whisssppperrr- O! So sweet!

              Your eyes twinkle- my heart pounnddesss!

             I see you as you see me

                            I

                               Am

                                      In

                                          Love

                                     With You!

  Joseph Graham copyright 1997                         

           

                   

by Diana_L - 15 months ago
Spain
Member Since: Jul 2008
Member Points: 13318

sweet and romantic :-)

by Stavisky - 15 months ago
Essen-Antwerp Belgium
Member Since: Nov 2007
Member Points: 537

Hello Joseph,

This is a beautyfull poem, right from the heart ! I like your style, and when it's the moment I'll make music for it ( as I already did for some friends poetrywriters, but for the moment I'm to busy !)

Friendly greetings,

Herman

by TonyGas - 14 months ago
London England
Member Since: Sep 2007
Member Points: 412

That is shit hot Joe. You really are in love aren't you? Or you were when you wrote it. Good stuff.

by wjones4 - 14 months ago
PA United States
Member Since: Feb 2008
Member Points: 1247

very nice !!

by Diana_L - 14 months ago
Spain
Member Since: Jul 2008
Member Points: 13318

You should use the feature I sent you once or similar one.

by Cazaar - 14 months ago
Oregon United States
Member Since: Aug 2008
Member Points: 3

Nice.

by bluskey - 4 months ago
n.j. United States
Member Since: Dec 2007
Member Points: 68

hi


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