My second rated game: The first of many wins (I hope)

So my previous blog talks about how my first rated game was somewhat of a disaster, but in contrast, my second rated game was much better. I played Black again, which I wasn't entirely happy about, but I was a lot happier with the result; a win with Black in 24 moves is nothing to sneeze at.

Included below is the game diagram, feel free to leave your thoughts.