My first Poem

i'm sitting idle doing nothing in my room
just looking at the laptop with eyes zoom
the ceiling fan is running very very slow
i'm very eagerly waiting for the sun to go
    there are frames but no windows
    heat is coming in like myriad sorrows
    there are rashes all over my ugly body
    still i'm very busy in my boring study
i'm feeling hungry but i cant help
as i have nothing so i can only yelp
still waiting for the sun to hide
as i've trouble facing his hotter side
    the internet is working but slowly
    so i can open a webpage one n only
    i'm so much desperate to open the facebook
    but the browser says your connection is crook
there's no way to get out of this situation
slowly and slowly building up my frustration
i'm missing my friends n their company
so i'll have to keep playing my symphony
    now as this is my first attempt in writing a poem
    so no feelings involved; only words and no idiom
    i know you'll find this poem boring and sarcastic
    coz you don't know i'm soooo   lazy and lethargic


  • 3 years ago


    nice oneSmile

  • 3 years ago


    thank you guys...thank you soooo much for appreciation,admiration and encouragement

  • 3 years ago


    yeah i agree!and dont be sad....anyway im happy cuz u managed to open the page!Tongue Outnice poem!keep writing!u have a gift from god!Smile

  • 3 years ago


    Feel sad about U.But there are lot of people in the world,who don't have a laptop.

    My advice is to dn't be lazy,coz a lion should find meat.Meat won't come closer to a lion.

    Good try! All the best! :D

  • 3 years ago


    good one :)

  • 3 years ago


    nice one....:)

  • 3 years ago


    Impressive :)

  • 3 years ago


    Nice peom.

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