Inferiority

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LegendarySpartan

 

 

There are the big bad birds

They eat meat, rip flesh off bones

Snatch away nestlings to devour

 

*There are the cruel lowlifes

Who don't care about anyone but themselves

They rip families apart, loom over the weak*

 

There are the small gentle birds

They eat nuts, suck nectar out of flowers

Snatch at nuts to peck

 

*There are the weak in society

Can't protect themselves, much less others

They cower before muggers, tremble in fear*

 

There are the medium-sized birds

No one knows what to think of them

Sometimes they suck nectar, other times they peck away at meat

 

*The commoners; no one pays much heed

They do what they want, but not beyond law

Sometimes they get chased by the baddies,

Or they look down on the poor and the weak*

 

The big bad birds chase the medium-sized ones

The medium-sized ones chase the small birds

Almost snatches a bad babe right out of the air

 

All are birds in the end;

All are the prey in the end.

 

LegendarySpartan

It's 3 poems in one; read the poem as a whole, then read the parts that do not start with a asterisk as one poem, afterwhich, read the parts that start with a asterisk as another separate poem

im_practical

Ok

IncredibleFlower

Lovely poem u really are great legendary godm u extra talented  😍😘

LegendarySpartan
IncredibleFlower wrote:

Lovely poem u really are great legendary godm u extra talented  😍😘

Thank you 🥰I appreciate it😍😍😍😍✍✍✍✍

prashant191028081

Really you and your poems deserves  huge love❣️😍.

Your imagination power is really too strong .

Basically you compared the power distribution among stronger , middle range , weaker section.

Not only in society but in animals too .

Yes this trend of power is shattered everywhere .

One who is stronger uses their power for ruining the life of   weaker one's .

I really enjoyed the poem .

Your poems seems very simple with some major concerns related to socitey and that is simply great .

👏👏👏👏

No one will dare to criticize you poems .

😍😍😍😍😍👌👌👌👌👌

 

Deborah88

Yep this poem is true in life indeed 

LegendarySpartan
Deborah88 wrote:

Yep this poem is true in life indeed 

🙌🙌🙌🙌😁

LegendarySpartan

Thanks, Igorgrin.png Someone did say I sound like Ted Hughes because of the way I phrased my sentenceshappy.png I'd like to see your poems though...