Cool game that went through all the phases of chess, opening middle game, and endgame. There were some elementary mistakes I can see in all the phases.
5.Qxd4 this is perfectly fine, but you could consider taking with the knight as his opening play with his queen is not "correct" and you could try to exploit this. Blacks queen deprives the knight of the natural f6 square, trading queens gives black this square back.
8.Bd3 I dont like the position of the bishop on this square, I would have like to have it on e2 or c4. I think f3 or Be2 should have been played to avoid the annoying Ng4. Castle long would also have been better.
9.Nd1 Well this is just wrong. "Undeveloping" moves are almost always bad, I guess you were trying to avoid getting your pawns doubled but it just fails as your knight is hanging anyway. Castling either way would have been much better
17.dxc5 17.Nxd6 just wins a pawn if not two, as your threatening Nxc8 followed by Bxa6
18.Rae1. Well its good to get your rooks to an open file but Nd6 again will atleast win the bishop. You also got a threat of Bc4+ followed by Nf7+. This is better for tactical reasons. His knight on a6 is kind of loose
22.Be6 I dont really like this move. Offcourse black would love to trade his knight for the bishop, but he just cant as the rook endgame is hopeless. But say here: 22...Rb8 23.b3 Nb5 His knight has acually managed to find some activity. Its better to maintain the bishop where it is, dominating the knight, and playing Re7 followed by Re1. The bishop vs knight endgame is actually a fairly trivial matter to convert should the rook be traded off.
22...Nxe6 This is a poor judgement by black, the endgame is hopeless.
30.30.Rxe7+ This is an easily winning endgame, but the way your pushing your pawns forward is not really neccesary. On principle in the endgame: Activate your king, instead of pushing your pawns: Bring your king to the center. It just eliminates any kind of hope he might have. The way you played it he had some chances of bringing his king back to the kingside. Maybe the endgame is even a draw after that. Im not sure, ill leave to others to judge, but if you activated your king the endgame would have been much easier.
[I post my wins in this forum under the theory that if I lose I'm at such a low level there will be obvious blunders that lead to the loss but if I win my mistakes are far less obvious, so that's why this game is a win.]
This is, statistically, my best win (against my highest rated opponent). We played four games and he crushed me in the other three. I want to know where I could have improved my play in this one.
Thanks for checking it out guys.