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Teraus

I've never posted a game for analysis here. I know it would make more sense to put a game I lost so I could improve, but I'd like to know if there's anything I could have done better.



Bobbarooski

Loved your comment at the end!

rayushka

 4....- Qe7?! How about 4...- Bb4... Would have won a queen straight away. 

Pre_VizsIa

15... Bxg4+ could have lost the bishop to a pawn.

On 16, ditto. If black had responded axb4, it would not be mate, though black would still be in serious trouble.

OldHastonian
rayushka wrote:

 4....- Qe7?! How about 4...- Bb4... Would have won a queen straight away. 

Quite right, but the OP should perhaps look at why he played 4...Qe7 anyway; a poor move when developement was needed.

Teraus
rayushka wrote:

 4....- Qe7?! How about 4...- Bb4... Would have won a queen straight away. 

Oh my God, I didn't notice that.

Teraus
Timothy_P wrote:

15... Bxg4+ could have lost the bishop to a pawn.

On 16, ditto. If black had responded axb4, it would not be mate, though black would still be in serious trouble.

Wouldn't he lose his rook if he got my bishop?

tastendruecker

White would in fact loose his rook and the game after axb4.

 

Earlier in the game you could have played 9. ... Ne3 to win a pawn.

 

12. ... Bg4 is a wasted move if white doesn't fall for the trap and continues developing with Nf3 and castles.

13. ... Qh4+ is better than 13. ... Bh5 if white doesn't blunder. 

Pre_VizsIa
Teraus wrote:
Timothy_P wrote:

15... Bxg4+ could have lost the bishop to a pawn.

On 16, ditto. If black had responded axb4, it would not be mate, though black would still be in serious trouble.

Wouldn't he lose his rook if he got my bishop?


 

Whoops! Yes (duh). It would've prolonged the game though. You could've mated with the queen: Qd3#. No difference, just slightly more natural move to play, but decidely less cool. 
Teraus

Wow, so many things I didn't notice.

 

But... Wait, Qd3? There's a bishop there, how can I even get there?

If you meant Qg3+, he could just block it with a knight.