A Long Twisted Haiku

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DPenn

A Long Twisted Haiku--

I hug my pillow

at night and think about you,

wondering if we

will ever be face to face.

It is good to live--

The internet blows my mind;

Connections with words

stealing a mental embrace.

I watch my cat fight

outside in the morning light.

She swishes her tail,

growling and lunging at other.

Sidetracked by A-Team--

Nostalgia from my past life

washes through my brain.

Did those days ever exist?

Writch

cat and mind wander
both growling on an old fence
all three should be fixed

Sadsongster

Tossed and tangled sheets

Sleeping solo in double bed

Long and lonely nights.

 

(D, your poem made me sad, remembering some of the nights I've spent when I was un-able to turn off my mind and sleep.  Writch's made me laugh . . .)

StrategicusRex

Haikus are short, sure,

But can have the same beauty

Of lengthy poems.

DPenn

Sadsongster, I am sorry my poem made you sad.  It's not really sad but just, I guess, pragmatic.  Wow!  Think what kind of poems I would write if I weren't on anti-depressants! lol

Writch

an eye in a box
tears up with sinful laughter
but hides saintly fears

Writch

fashioned human clay
fired in kilns of martyrs
hold divine beauty

DPenn

ewww...I like that! I am inadvertently and/or subconsciously saying that I feel boxed in...?  That's Rich! Kiss

Writch


unexplainable
mustard seeds sowed in a field
will shelter song birds

StrategicusRex

When evil expands

Its holdings across the world,

Righteousness resists.

Writch
theweaponking wrote:

When evil expands

Its holdings across the world,

Righteousness resists.


try more imagery, less abstraction...

choking vines and weeds
wilt under the glory of
the valley lily

StrategicusRex

The poor light bulb dies

As the cruel hand cuts off

Its source of power.

StrategicusRex

That haiku may be better but hey,

My brain does not function in that way.

I'm not descriptive,

I am narrative.

Which can make my work boring and gray.