The lyrics were deep
Loved it
Act like everything is alright (i wrote this for my mom😔😓)
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You're really good at this woww!
Feb 5, 2024
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ADRianSK33k wrote:
ill try to use my guitar for it, speaking of guitar, I got a nw one! kinda cool I guess...
that's amazing!! we'll talk more via email
Look i'll be honest and will not butter it up........
so, the song is very good but the lyrics are not matching up at all , a song is kind of a small story so you have to stick with only one part and not run here and there from one aspect of life to another or you will mess it up.........
so stick with only one aspect of life and then try to write it like you write a poem it'll be way better in that way.
And the song is still very good..... keep up the good work 
Feb 5, 2024
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Abhay_This_side wrote:
Look i'll be honest and will not butter it up........
so, the song is very good but the lyrics are not matching up at all , a song is kind of a small story so you have to stick with only one part and not run here and there from one aspect of life to another or you will mess it up.........
so stick with only one aspect of life and then try to write it like you write a poem it'll be way better in that way.
And the song is still very good..... keep up the good work
I just write songs about the shit that goes on in my life and yes im not very good at it but im trying
Abhay_This_side wrote:
Look i'll be honest and will not butter it up........
so, the song is very good but the lyrics are not matching up at all , a song is kind of a small story so you have to stick with only one part and not run here and there from one aspect of life to another or you will mess it up.........
so stick with only one aspect of life and then try to write it like you write a poem it'll be way better in that way.
And the song is still very good..... keep up the good work
The matched up great and it made total sense, and it rhymed great sometimes songs sound better when their being sung instead of just reading them.
Btw Huskyl0ver it was a great song!
Jul 22, 2024
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ChessEeveeNRiolu wrote:
Abhay_This_side wrote:
Look i'll be honest and will not butter it up........
so, the song is very good but the lyrics are not matching up at all , a song is kind of a small story so you have to stick with only one part and not run here and there from one aspect of life to another or you will mess it up.........
so stick with only one aspect of life and then try to write it like you write a poem it'll be way better in that way.
And the song is still very good..... keep up the good work
The matched up great and it made total sense, and it rhymed great sometimes songs sound better when their being sung instead of just reading them.
Btw Huskyl0ver it was a great song!
Umm when did u come???💀💀💀
what u mean???
WiseThinkingMan wrote:
ChessEeveeNRiolu wrote:
Abhay_This_side wrote:
Look i'll be honest and will not butter it up........
so, the song is very good but the lyrics are not matching up at all , a song is kind of a small story so you have to stick with only one part and not run here and there from one aspect of life to another or you will mess it up.........
so stick with only one aspect of life and then try to write it like you write a poem it'll be way better in that way.
And the song is still very good..... keep up the good work
The matched up great and it made total sense, and it rhymed great sometimes songs sound better when their being sung instead of just reading them.
Btw Huskyl0ver it was a great song!
Umm when did u come???💀💀💀
Same feeling man lol. She just joined the club but why are people from my past like you showing up lol?
Jul 26, 2024
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ChessEeveeNRiolu wrote:
what u mean???
Don't worry don't worry 😊👍
Jul 26, 2024
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charlesbeat21 wrote:
WiseThinkingMan wrote:
ChessEeveeNRiolu wrote:
Abhay_This_side wrote:
Look i'll be honest and will not butter it up........
so, the song is very good but the lyrics are not matching up at all , a song is kind of a small story so you have to stick with only one part and not run here and there from one aspect of life to another or you will mess it up.........
so stick with only one aspect of life and then try to write it like you write a poem it'll be way better in that way.
And the song is still very good..... keep up the good work
The matched up great and it made total sense, and it rhymed great sometimes songs sound better when their being sung instead of just reading them.
Btw Huskyl0ver it was a great song!
Umm when did u come???💀💀💀
Same feeling man lol. She just joined the club but why are people from my past like you showing up lol?
No idea lol
I used to wonder why,
You couldn't ever be alright.
you always yelling in the living room,
always knew you were doomed when it came to love.
I had hope that,
they would work things out.
You're still together,
but nothing lasts forever.
Even love disappears,
after everything clears.
Loving is hard,
I know it don't always work
Love can make you,
or it can break you.
Don't let it break you!
Don't surrender!
Don't break under the pressure.
Don't think about just quitting it all.
You don't have to act like you're okay,
Not with me
I'm here for you.
I'm here for you.
You love someone,
but do you truly know them?
It make take some time,
for you to find out the truth.
The truth hurts,
I know it does.
Do you really want live with the regret?
Do you really see yourself,
spending the rest of your life with him?
Will you really love him forever?
What's point of holding on
to something that wont last?
I don't wanna see you break anymore,
loving shouldn't be a chore.
If you're worried bout me,
don't be.
I'll be okay,
I only pray you're okay.
Loving is hard,
I know it don't always work
Love can make you,
or it can break you.
Don't let it break you!
Don't surrender!
Don't break under the pressure.
Don't think about just quitting it all.
You don't have to act like you're okay,
Not with me
I'm here for you.
I'm here for you.
You've always been there for me,
now it's my turn,
Let me be there for you.
You have the weight of the world on your shoulders.
I know it feels like a boulder.
The love is getting colder.
I can feel it dying,
is that why you always crying inside?
Put on a happy face for everyone.
I don't know what goes on,
inside your head.
Don't know what's being said,
all I know is you hold it in,
feel pinned down.
All I know is..
Loving is hard,
I know it don't always work
Love can make you,
or it can break you.
Don't let it break you!
Don't surrender!
Don't break under the pressure.
Don't think about just quitting it all.
You don't have to act like you're okay,
Not with me
I'm here for you.
I'm here for you.
It's okay if you want to break,
you don't have to fake.
Im here for you,
you know that's true.
The good days for you,
are far and few.
Don't think I havent noticed,
how you look so broken.
All your wounds open.
You've been so strong,
Through it all,
even when you've been treated wrong.
If they knew what was going on,
inside your head,
They'd understand why you try to hide.
Why you want to fight,
even when nothing is right.
You try your best,
I know you do.
Don't act like everything's okay,
when I'm around, no need to hide.
Take off that happy mask,
no need to fake,
end that task.
Loving is hard,
I know it don't always work
Love can make you,
or it can break you.
Don't let it break you!
Don't surrender!
Don't break under the pressure.
Don't think about just quitting it all.
You don't have to act like you're okay,
Not with me
I'm here for you.
I'm here for you.
It's okay if you wanna break.
No more needing to fake.
Don't act like,
everything's always okay.
You don't need to act with me.
You can be free.
Do what's best for you,
don't have a clue but that's okay.
You don't have to act like you're okay.
Stop acting like everything's okay.
Stop holding it in.
Just stop acting.
You can break.