An excerpt from my novel.

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RyanGarner

Here is a taste of the novel I am writing.

"The distinct architecture of the building was profoundly awe stricking. The breahtaking panoramic view of the balcony was enought to tell one, that my collegue was horrible affluent. A slender rivulet trickled in a small circlet before, ever so thunderously, cascading down the jagged mountian peaks and into the foaming waterfall. Along the edges of the balcony rail, sat, slouched over, gargoyles. Evil gleam in their eyes, fangs barred, looking as if they were ready to pounce at a moments notice. All of these creature were floes, thus suggesting my friend lived on the tallest summet throughout the county.

In totality, I was his only visitor. I would even have to deliver a parcel of Girl Scout Cookies to him, because the troop would be too frightened to rap on the door of his accommodation (I wonder why?). The bizzar, foreign art style he cherished, refused to irk me."

Like it?

red_ratfan

cool what is book called

RyanGarner

I don't know. I don't have a name yet.

chesskingboy

fix a few misspellings but other than that its gr8 ryan keep it up:)

robotjazz

Very descriptively paints a picture. I always wanted to write a book, but I never really could. I love to play music instead. I wanted to write a book about a kid that was always right, and knew how to fix serious problems like homelessness and poverty,but no one would listen to him because he was just a kid. and then he went crazy because of it. I'm thinking about trying to get someone to write it for me....

red_ratfan

how many pages you have 

RyanGarner

Yeah, beside the mispellings, its fine. I have not a clue for the title, but I think i'm at 37/40 pages.

red_ratfan

coool

remember me when you are $1000000000

RyanGarner

Oh, I will. FREE COPIES! :D