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There was once a doll

Like all the dolls I had

Red eyes that stared dead ahead

Two hands

Two legs

Clawing at my face

Devilishly-wide grin, toothless

Yet with a tongue as long as Lilith's hair,

she choked me, and dragged

me to eternal darkness,

only to thrive in flames.

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wow

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What do you think?😅

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thumbup.pngthumbup.pngthumbup.png (all my emotions...its awesome, especially last "sentence"

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5/5

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cause your russian 

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they give out of 5's

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not 10's

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RosieElite wrote:

cause your russian 

Umm... I studied in Singapore for 4 years straight...what's that supposed to mean?😅

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Oh

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My bad😅

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Winter_Wolf19 wrote:

 (all my emotions...its awesome, especially last "sentence"

I intended to write "burn in flames" but I felt that was a bit too cliché, so I changed it to "thrive in flames"grin.png

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Cool

A Ford Mustang (me) with some Aventadors(u guys)

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Aventadors/

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I hardly try to write poems that rhyme because they're usually too cliché sad.png Glad you liked it wink.png

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LegendarySpartan wrote:

I hardly try to write poems that rhyme because they're usually too cliché  Glad you liked it

Yes, I don't like cliché. Btw very good poem, queen of poems😀

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Hehe there are way better poets than me out there... take @Anu_2107 for instance grin.png

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