Final Stand

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What the-

Agreed

yea

its not coredt at all

Tell me the mistakes tough guy.

well i could but i like where this is going smt that by no m,ean correct but intreating

i like this idea

Just do it.

Cmon.

i just dont understand it it sound as if jack was first then ant then other then me then forums correct of do i not understand correcty

The First sentence was just a small sneak peak technically. "Before anyone even knew about this creation of an baffling thing." No one else except Ant which you will know in the next sentence. "The mythical figure of Jack joined this creation. "I exist," He was a creature of its own, marking the first words spoken in the guild." This is just the first sentence but in actual order, Understand please. The forums part just means that forums were starting to be created with the burst of people joining.

This story will now not be canon and will follow a more action filled route.

good

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Guys should I write this in first or thrd person

writ its like a greek story of a god

Ok so third person

yea but i think it would be cool if it sound like it a old camp fire story