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Welcome to the Game Review Forum!

Not everyone has a diamond membership, and because we want all our members to improve, this is our solution!

Submit your game link here for review, and one of our amazing admins, @MoxieM99 or @asamact, will review it for you and provide results! Please give them 2 days maximum to give you your results! They will come in due time!

Happy Chessing!

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Wait how many can i give

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Ububybyvyvyvyvyvyvyvyvy wrote:

Wait how many can i give

i think 5 max is good

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asamact wrote:
Ububybyvyvyvyvyvyvyvyvy wrote:

Wait how many can i give

i think 5 max is good

3 max a day, let's do that. We need this to be an unlimited rss for everyone, so let's do that, otherwise, I need more reviewers.

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ReadyLearner001 wrote:
asamact wrote:
Ububybyvyvyvyvyvyvyvyvy wrote:

Wait how many can i give

i think 5 max is good

3 max a day, let's do that. We need this to be an unlimited rss for everyone, so let's do that, otherwise, I need more reviewers.

oh k

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https://www.chess.com/analysis/game/live/164565413176/analysis

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Alright, so I see some issues.

1. You need to look for threats. Somebody once taught me you need to ask yourself these questions when you play a move:

What am I threatening, and what is my opponent threatening?

What becomes least defended by this move?

What am I trying to do with this move?

Otherwise, great job I guess.

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All that tells me I should go back to classical chess.

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I won't have time to think all that with 10 mins.

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ReadyLearner001 wrote:

I won't have time to think all that with 10 mins.

Then at least think about the threats.

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What abt this game

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Ububybyvyvyvyvyvyvyvyvy wrote:

What abt this game

you'll have to attach it as a link, otherwise i cannot review it

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Ububybyvyvyvyvyvyvyvyvy wrote:

What abt this game

I'd recommend doing a King's Indian Defense if they ever play a London, so try studying Nf6 if they play d4, and you can get a good counter. It was still a good game, but try thinking of limiting your opponent's pieces movements like instead of trading center pawns, play 7. c4. That can get you a good advantage in the early middlegame and limit their spaces.

Also, keep watch for attackers and defenders if you're going to invade territory. That's how you lost a pawn. Also it didn't have to be a draw. You could've played on for a slight win by not moving your f pawn to f7. It's never good to move your defender pawns that protect the king UNLESS if the queen is out and there's no more real threats on the king.

That's all in my opinion without game review, so I'll hand it over to @MoxieM99 for any extras.

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Watch for threats, mainly. You missed a lot of them.

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am i the only one that can review with just what @Ububybyvyvyvyvyvyvyvyvy did

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MoxieM99 wrote:

Watch for threats, mainly. You missed a lot of them.

For example

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I was trying to kick the knight

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Ububybyvyvyvyvyvyvyvyvy wrote:
MoxieM99 wrote:

Watch for threats, mainly. You missed a lot of them.

For example

moves 11 and 12, they could have trapped ur knight but they missed it

move 20 let them trap ur knight which they missed

move 31 let them fork u, but they missed it

so did move 33

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Ububybyvyvyvyvyvyvyvyvy wrote:

I was trying to kick the knight

no need to waste a move

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asamact wrote:
Ububybyvyvyvyvyvyvyvyvy wrote:
MoxieM99 wrote:

Watch for threats, mainly. You missed a lot of them.

For example

moves 11 and 12, they could have trapped ur knight but they missed it

move 20 let them trap ur knight which they missed

move 31 let them fork u, but they missed it

so did move 33

The fork I was gonna play qe1 check