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My first poem on Chess.com
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Thanks for the Poem.
Wow. I think it's great.
Wow! You have an amazing way with words!
Joined this group and have enjoyed reading a lot of the poetry on here. Thought I would submit one of my own for judgment as I have judged others. Am not sure if this poem is my best for public consumption; it was very personal and written for someone whom I knew would relate to the meanings but it was written quickly, a flow of raw emotion and because of that I like it.
Jamie
Pacific Beauty Deep
Lying cold
Together we fit
W/ Crystal shard eyes
Vision of one
A smell so intoxicating
Narcotic in addiction
Inside you know?
Blind to, all eyes watching?
Deaf to their song?
All their words are yours
Pacific beauty deep
Sum of great battles
Waging war for beauty
Awaken all mens warrior
Fighting, for you
Listening to Sirens call
Wrecking ships of dreams
Throw myself, onto rocks?
Pacific beauty deep