My Poem: When Will I Fly

Hey guys. I love writing stories and poems. In this post, I'll be posting my best ever poem-When Will I Fly. I wrote it when I was 7.  Please tell me how it was. I have put the link of my story blog in my profile so don't forget to see it. 

When Will I Fly

When I was a small child,

I often looked at the sky.

Seeing the birds I wondered,

When I’ll be able to fly!

I don’t want to look as beautiful as a Peacock,

Or be as stunning as a Flamingo.

I don’t care whether I look pretty or ugly,

I just want to fly freely out of my window!

One day I will cross the seven vast, deep seas,

When the sun will be bright and the sky will be blue.

That will surely be my best trip ever,

And happily I will bid the seas adieu!

-         By Bhavya Agrawal (That's me)

i love it 

for a seven years old smarter then me 

Thats amazing

Thanks a lot

Thanks to you too.