my rap

intellect spots the fake

elevate a level then escape

no reason for the jake

all is civil when the bars start dropin

create nonsense with the pen, never stopin

to much am i imagining

for the simple man, so start scattering

flee the scene cause i'm hovering

stealth mode, destroying and bludgering

start planning on retirement from the game

mc's weaken in such ways, when they here my name

spitten rich vocals when i step on stage

engage the world to begin a new age

That is good.

i'm glad you liked it, it was a hobby of mine when i was a teanager. some of the words are slang hoped you understood them.

my brother is the good one though, he has actually made a few tracks with his friends, with beats and all. he is always free-styling and writing rap songs.

Bravo for you for writing poetry in a language that is clearly not your native tongue.  I shudder to think how my poetry would look in Spanish, my second language.

thank you csharpe, even tho english is my second languish i spent most of my life in America and grew up around rap music most of my teenage years. i have a little practice in writing lyrics too, it was a hobby of mine as i wrote in #3

thank you very much that's a great compliment, my brother told me the same just yesterday and he is the one with the experience. he is very good and has done a few shows at pool parties and clubs.