new song by me

one more time by J.A.B (my singer/rapper name) (clean)

First verse: “i never knew that last time was the last time I’d see you, what i’d give to kiss that smile, just for a while but life moves on, how could it go so fast i never knew, you said you loved me for forever but our forever didn’t last now I’m stuck on the thought of a former life when all I wanted was you and you left me here heartbroken but still If i had a choice  (chrous) between living in my self hatred and being with you one more time I’d chose the ladder every time, Could i just have one more time with you, kiss you one one time, be happy one more time with you, because i won’t be happy without you, so I’ll just pray to a god who i’ve lost faith in to be with you just one more time. (verse 2) You said i was messed up and that’s why you left, but it wasn’t ever me, it was you, all I wanted was a girl who could love me and you used me, then threw me away, just like a damn diaper, (oh hell no) that’s what i’ve been redused to, look what you’ve done to me, i’m here crying in the bathroom every damn day and you are living the life with that rich guy who you cheated on me with, oh why do i do this to myself, I kidded myself into beleving you loved me, why am I so _ naive. (chorus) But if i could just be with you one more time just like it used to be woud things get better? They have to get better (verse 3) look what you’ve done to me, I used to be happy, content, now i’m  nothing, and i’m worthless, why couldn’t you have stayed, I loved you now I have no love left.

(this is  a rap btw)

and you say that you hardly ever write songs. JUST JOIN THE CLUB UAIR FOR SONGWRITERS

I do hardly ever, that's my 2nd complete song, I have 2 others that are partial

well you should still post in my club, most people hardly ever post

fine send link not here but like in chat or something

i'll just send a invite

I join

Wow, that's cool, I like it! 😸

thxxx