Recklessly cautious,
the shy ego waits for signs of approval;
To be noticed even...
Then hides behind the anonymity
of words
and runs undercover to the lonely solitude
of compulsive perfection
in a world of ideas,
thereby allowing said ego not to be pierced again
by imperfect companionship.
Good stuff
Thank you jason. We don't have chess matches in this group. ;)
I am sure this is something out of personal experience....it's a good description of what actually happens.
I enjoyed your poem very much. After the second read I felt that there is an under lying theme that seemed to deepen or lengthen the succinctly written piece.
Recklessly cautious,
the shy ego waits for signs of approval;
To be noticed even...
Then hides behind the anonymity
of words
and runs undercover to the lonely solitude
of compulsive perfection
in a world of ideas,
thereby allowing said ego not to be pierced again
by imperfect companionship.