This is my writing yesterday. My mum said I need to learn how to use conjunction to make longer sentences. Currently my sentences are often short.
Popcorn The Rabbit, by Elena, July 5, 2023 (typed by Amber)
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Really nice!
Could I also share stuff like this?
Popcorn is a clean and playful baby rabbit. He is 4 months old. His birthday is on Febuarary 1st. He is very clean and never dirty. He is very smart and loves eating and playing. He is black and brown, and we knew we had to pick him at the pet store. He is very loved and very healthy.
He loves to play with his toys. He pushes them, he plays with them, and he is a balanced pet. He only gets his dessert if he eats his grass. He was very nervous when he first came to our house. Still, he can be scared sometimes. But now he is more confident with the habitat he lives in. He gets scared easily. When he is scared, he will be in the corner shaking. When he sleeps, or is comfortable, he will lie down.
We all love Popcorn! One day, we were just giving him his dessert when he suddenly jumped out of his cage we were shocked!