puzzle

Here is a puzzle i created! it needs a little work

it is kind of bad, but give me feedback on how to improve it plz. I made this with a friend. 

Thanks

first, its just a bunch of random moves, and there is probably a better alternative to some of them. second, dont move the king first because it doesnt force any move.  good job for your first try though, it takes some courage to stand up in front of a large audience and accept critique.

Well the puzzle is good overall

it’s good, but Kf8 is prob not the best move, and those random checks aren’t really helping.