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Skybax

Where does the sleeper go?

When sleeping, somewhere close

The sleeper goes, where the sleeper goes

Right above your nose!

-by Me :-)

Skybax

 

Whereabouts

 

You can't see me cause I'm not here. I'm over there. Because there isn't here, here is here and there is there. And I'm there. So I'm not here, so you can't see me. You see my residue, of where I once was, because I'm no longer here. I'm there.

 

-by Me :-)

jimthemagic

reader's block on reader's blog

ain't havin´ speaker's block
although I should
while I'm readin´
this reader's blog

havin´ no writer's block
either, although I could
while enjoyin´ this
reader's blog

reader's block I got,
so bad
just a title,
a line or two,
is all I can do

pawnsolo2

I've played it all-thought out movements-game in hand-might as well tell- how we all end up the same-in the end-the rules must change-and bend-no one ever really the same-ever really winning a game-I've played it all out

lancer72

well its kinda short but it doesnt ryhme and if you want to see it its my newest blog

bulletheadbilly

I'll Drink to Girls that say they Will,

I'll Drink to Girls that say they Won't,

But I Will Not Drink to girls that say they Will and Later Don't,

dloulou

I have turned into dust ,

couldn't be the same anymore ,

how could I , in my own land , be so lost,

when I was the only one who watched everything grow.

HOPE U LIKE IT ;-)

pawnsolo2

tell me where the forgotten flower grows.

for a barren field thinning quick the memory

 has webbed  the corridor of childhoods missing glow.

is it here, in the now, inside the me?

still aching for the arching passing sun;

do thirsty roots rot and recoil us?

can these question germinate the answer!

Yuyuuchan

Everyone seeks a home...

Leaving their nests behind...

Only to return to the starting line...

And to remember what was lost in the beginning of time.

Yuyuuchan

The girl waits.

She waits. She waits. She waits.

In the bitter silence she waits.

Yet no one stirs. No one comes.

There are no hello or good byes.

And the dream dies.

pawnsolo2

Gray passions veiled in expression, haunted masks of loves missing touch covering the blue flesh of the sky, expands accross the full width of my horizon: floating over our city which lays in bones under the stretched skin of an extinct knowledge growing along the desert floor.

csharpe

I've sought no ordinary permission,
and though it was dished out glad-handedly,
the alphabet belongs to the wind
or locked in a chest with the lost souls
while sentient beings struggle at the wheel
and wind riots through the canyons
above the thief

Only metaphors can rebuild those souls
for just this side of heaven the volunteers are ready
with pots and pans to bang the new day into place
while the transient remains wedded
to a wounded heart.  I wonder
who is boss of the magic

The snakes quote a price
and though the thought is half off
it's still too much to ask
given the sun will rise on the machines
while likelihoods go hungry

PVilla

Extremely effective juxtaposition of such a dichotomy of two emotions.  One of the best I've read.  Made my day!

"while the transient remains wedded
to a wounded heart."

MINTAKASTAR

my heart is hurt

i've hurt another heart

and in the end both heart are hurt

DPenn

--The Shower--

Hot water

beating down

my neck and back

my cheek pressed against

the cool tile,

feels better than

any man's hand

I have known;

Almost like a good book.

Writch
DPenn wrote:

...

feels better than

any man's hand

I have known;

Almost like a good book.


 DPenn: Almost like a good book....is an abrupt ending and almost a non-sequitur. As a reader, I was enjoying the shower with you only to be jerked out of the warm, wet soothing shower and plopped into the hot, dry heat of an armchair parked next to a fireplace (just a stereotypical place for a good read).

If you don't mind a recommendation, keep the shower-as-better-lover metaphor going (for examples):

feels better than
any man's hand
I have known;
gentle and unrushed -
undemanding attention.

or

feels better than
any man's hand
I have known;
If I could just spend
the whole night
in its embrace.

DPenn

Thanks Writch.  I added that last line rather abruptly, actually.  Maybe I should just take it out.  The point was that reading is so pleasurable for me there is really nothing better.  Also, word can really transport us into another realm, can't they?  Isn't that what good books do? 

Writch
DPenn wrote:

...The point was that reading is so pleasurable for me there is really nothing better.  Also, word can really transport us into another realm, can't they?  Isn't that what good books do? 


 I agree whole-heartedly! So much so, that I challenge you to write a few lines about your Book-as-better-lover. (It deserves its own attention).

DPenn

Thanks Writch.  I added that last line rather abruptly, actually.  Maybe I should just take it out.  The point was that reading is so pleasurable for me there is really nothing better.  Also, words can really transport us into another realm, can't they?  Isn't that what good books do? 

pawnsolo2

Dreams are fairy wings
marionettes with no strings
dancing in the darkness
laughing at the pain
bringing hope to the hopeless
and despair to the vain