Yes it can escape, but it will take a lot of tempi to do it. Also, what do you mean by trapped by blue and green? It's alt teams
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The position as far as I tested it still lacks complicatedness and is too linear to be accepted. Yet, you did fix problems with balance, and it is a very good start.
Adding pawns on 4th rank may add a bit more complicatedness, and I would pick something sharp to make it overall more exciting: knight-rider promotion or camel-riders at the start. Riders would be a sharp yet good addition here.
Either way, I suggest you to implement these ideas along with keeping balance, and then you could do minor corrections to refine it more - and it will gradually get good enough to be accepted.
ive improved the position with a few ideas from me and others who sent me feedback, so i will share the position again. if something else must be done, tell me and i will try to improve.
I switched the colors so this tempo can be used to save from mate.
Another fact is that i changed the checks for everyone. The king has 4 checks (instead of 3) and the pawn has 10 (instead of 15)
near the end of the blue and green carpets (this is the name i will use from now on to describe the royal road aka the ranks where the pawns are placed) i added a dead pawn to make it easier to promote (=CRBN). At the end of the carpets, there are friendly pieces, a grasshopper and a blocked rook.
finally, i added an extra wazir to the queen barrier, but owned the teams' king player.
If you want to help me test this position, use this FEN (but correct the emojis)
R-0,0,0,0-0,0,0,0-0,0,0,0-0,0,0,0-0-{'royal'
'd1','a9','k14','n6'),'lives'
4,10,4,10)}-
6,yQ,yQ,2,yK,3/
3,gF,X,X,X,X,X,X,X,3/
3,gW,gF,rW,8/
10,X,1,dB,bG/
1,bW,1,X,X,4,dP,1,dB,X,dB/
bP,1,bN,dP,dP,dP,2,dP,dP,dP,X,X,yR/
X,X,X,X,X,X,bN,yN,X,X,X,X,X,X/
X,X,X,X,X,X,rN,gN,X,X,X,X,X,X/
rR,X,X,dP,dP,dP,2,dP,dP,dP,gN,1,gP/
dB,X,dB,1,dP,4,X,X,1,gW,1/
gG,dB,1,X,10/
8,yW,bF,bW,3/
3,X,X,X,X,X,X,X,bF,3/
3,rK,2,rQ,rQ,6