The Inquisitor

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Original (1)

Chainmail caked in rusty red blood

Sword nicked from slaying pagans that did no wrong

Tons of innocent blood spilled

 

V1

Chainmail caked in rusty red blood

Sword nicked from slaying pagans that did no wrong

The angels' blood spilt on stone

 

V2

 

Chainmail caked in rusty red blood

Sword nicked from slaying pagans that did no wrong

Angels' blood water the stone

 

V3 (3)

Chainmail caked in rusty red blood

Sword nicked from slaying pagans that did no wrong

The angels' blood spill on stone

 

V4 (1)

Chainmail caked in rusty red blood

Sword nicked from slaying pagans that did no wrong

The angels' blood pour on stone

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Hi all! Please vote for your fav version, thank you grin.png

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oh....so sad poem....gold.png

V4 is the best as I think, can't explain why

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The Inquisitors were sent by the Pope (I forgot which one) to basically suppress anyone was against the Christian faith (sorry if I offended anyone)

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V3

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im_practical wrote:

V3

 

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I love V1, 2, 3, 4 and best is 3

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Looks like V3 is the most popular XD