The new work of Zhane.

This forum is going to be for my poems, sonnets,etc.

Feel free to comment on any of my work XXVIII.

I have come back and I am a much wiser person than before, I shall take my work seriously now.

Although I am also seeking help, because of a common dilemma. At this moment in time I'm writing a book, which is fictional and is aimed at everyone with the best intentions. I have my main characters in place and a setting, however I am starting to think about a title for my written book.

If you have any ideas as what to call it please advise me by private message, just because I'm saving this forum for my shorter works in the writer's diary.

Diary entry

Limerick

There was an old man from Peru,

who dreamed he was eating is shoe.

He awoke in the night

with a terrible fright,

and found out that it was quite true.

lol, I do like a good limerick!

Happy to help with a title sir but need an idea of the book before we can think.

Ok the basic outline of my book is about a couple looking for jobs in London, England to buy a new property.

Thy heart is like some icy lake,

On whose cold brink I stand;

Oh,buckle on my spirit's skate,

And lead, thou living saint, the way

To where the ice is thin--

That it may break beneath my feet

And let a lover in!