WHEN WRITTING A STORY...

...you should go by this...

I. CHAPTER EVALUATION-

a. is the first chapter interesting?

b. doees the first chapter introduce the main characters?

c. is the setting established?

d. is the conflict established?

II. SCENE EVALUATION -

a. is there a clear where and when?

b. does it appeal to three senses? (sight, sound, smell, touch, taste)

c. does the scene advance in the story?

d. is there a begining, middle, and end?

III. CHARACTER EVALUATION

a. physical description?

b. a past?

c. distinct way of speaking?

d. reveal who they are by actions/thoughts/appearance/speach

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• characters are strongly drawn, clearly seprate, and developed. past or future?
• conflict of story is clear. importance of it to characters is convincing. actions will produce new situations which will produce new actions. chartacters will struggle will their problems in interesting and meaningful ways. story will have a satisfying and logical climax.
• where the story takes place is clearly drawn and has an impact on the story. reader will experience the story through multile appeals. appropriet amout of the story is shown rather than hold.

I'll keep those in mind, thanks.

nice explaination for people who write that way but it doesnt work for me to write a story i just need a pen paper and silence i  zone out and write down a story, but i havnt written i a while..

not everything works for everyone i suppose. zoning out is what i usually do too. im going to try it this way and see how it does though.

ill try these rules after writing something, saying that i now have to write a storyXD

When writting a story, a good tip is, use a spell-checker. ;p