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Sep 9, 2020
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#5
LegendarySpartan wrote:
"Thee"😁nice use of alt rhymes 👍
Thx . Plz Criticize my poem 
Sep 10, 2020
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#7
LegendarySpartan wrote:
Remind me in three hours time ? I'll surely do it then 😊
Yea Sure
Noice
Sep 10, 2020
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#11
First things first, is this like a narrative poem of sorts? Like you're narrating a specific scene?
Sep 10, 2020
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#12
LegendarySpartan wrote:
First things first, is this like a narrative poem of sorts? Like you're narrating a specific scene?
Yes WW2
Sep 10, 2020
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#14
Roevik wrote:
Very dark, but interesting, well done!
Why are you so impressed with WW2? Indeed, there are a lot of victims, and most of these victims were not military, but civilians who were captured by the Nazis.
Thx, I will do that in the next poem
Sep 10, 2020
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#15
LegendarySpartan wrote:
But didn't more than two countries fight in WW2?
Ik. Its Just inspired by WW2 there was Cold war and many other wars between more than 2 countries. Even WW2 was started becuz of 2 countries
Sep 11, 2020
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#16
Roevik wrote:
Very dark, but interesting, well done!
Why are you so impressed with WW2? Indeed, there are a lot of victims, and most of these victims were not military, but civilians who were captured by the Nazis.
Oh you haven't seen darker poems yet....
Sep 11, 2020
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#17
ananthramdas wrote:
LegendarySpartan wrote:
But didn't more than two countries fight in WW2?
Ik. Its Just inspired by WW2 there was Cold war and many other wars between more than 2 countries. Even WW2 was started becuz of 2 countries
Ah...
It's a nice poem!😀
Why is there a world,
With so much suffering,
With pain and war have occured,
becuz 2 countries kept quarelling
When people die and families cry,
Instead of consoling them we,
we stay at home and enjoy,
and fully stay in a state of glee
When we look back in life,
We repent on our mistakes
but we continue onwards still in glee
Not remembering what our actions have lead to thee.