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Why is there a world,

With so much suffering,

With pain and war have occured,

becuz 2 countries kept quarelling

When people die and families cry,

Instead of consoling them we,

we stay at home and enjoy,

and fully stay in a state of glee

When we look back in life,

We repent on our mistakes

but we continue onwards still in glee

Not remembering what our actions have lead to thee. 

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thank's

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nacer23 wrote:

thank's

for?

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"Thee"😁nice use of alt rhymes 👍

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LegendarySpartan wrote:

"Thee"😁nice use of alt rhymes 👍

Thx . Plz Criticize my poem happy.png

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Remind me in three hours time ? I'll surely do it then 😊

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LegendarySpartan wrote:

Remind me in three hours time ? I'll surely do it then 😊

Yea Sure happy.png

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💖💖🤞

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Noice

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noice?

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First things first, is this like a narrative poem of sorts? Like you're narrating a specific scene? 

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LegendarySpartan wrote:

First things first, is this like a narrative poem of sorts? Like you're narrating a specific scene? 

Yes WW2 

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But didn't more than two countries fight in WW2?

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Roevik wrote:

Very dark, but interesting, well done!

Why are you so impressed with WW2? Indeed, there are a lot of victims, and most of these victims were not military, but civilians who were captured by the Nazis.

Thx, I will do that in the next poem

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LegendarySpartan wrote:

But didn't more than two countries fight in WW2?

Ik. Its Just inspired by WW2 there was Cold war and many other wars between more than 2 countries. Even WW2 was started becuz of 2 countries

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Roevik wrote:

Very dark, but interesting, well done!

Why are you so impressed with WW2? Indeed, there are a lot of victims, and most of these victims were not military, but civilians who were captured by the Nazis.

Oh you haven't seen darker poems yet....

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ananthramdas wrote:
LegendarySpartan wrote:

But didn't more than two countries fight in WW2?

Ik. Its Just inspired by WW2 there was Cold war and many other wars between more than 2 countries. Even WW2 was started becuz of 2 countries

Ah...

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It's a nice poem!😀

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Ananth is brilliant too wink.png

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Kamilotka wrote:

It's a nice poem!😀

Thx