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cutelittle wrote:
daFoxy wrote:
cutelittle wrote:

Amazing work!.. but... 

No rhymes? 

No, all poems don't have to rhyme and that's not what I'm talking abt really... the lyrics

What about the lyrics?

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LegendarySpartan wrote:
cutelittle wrote:
daFoxy wrote:
cutelittle wrote:

Amazing work!.. but... 

No rhymes? 

No, all poems don't have to rhyme and that's not what I'm talking abt really... the lyrics

What about the lyrics?

It's deep... but..how can you not care?

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When love makes you so blind to everything else that you don't give a care in the world as to how your idol treats you? 😂

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LegendarySpartan wrote:

When love makes you so blind to everything else that you don't give a care in the world as to how your idol treats you? 😂

wow.. like clearing the air I breathed in the smoke"?

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In a way, yes😂

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hmmm

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#thoughtful

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I would've tried writing too if....

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If?

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uh you can complete it anyway

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😅Ok... Wait, is that a poem topic you're suggesting? #confused

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No lol xDD there are many reasons, and prolly every reason you can think of fits there 

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-_-"

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😅

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🥳

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Can't judge this poem simply great!!!

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👏👏👏

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Lol thank you so much happy.png all feedback is welcome

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Nice one 

 

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Tysm💖💖💖