I think your poetry is as good as your mating technique.
Offered the Queen as bait...opponent bit...
to be fair if he had ignored the queen it was still likely a loss, just a much slower one. Hes a piece and a pawn down from the combo if he moves his bishop to escape instead.
Unrelated, but did you intentionally choose loose-stool as a handle? /boggle
I offered the Queen as bait...
The temptation was just too great...
My opponent bit...
And took the hit...
And now it is far too late!