1. Rather preachy about moves and games
Or
2. The author doesn't no squat about chess.
I'd rather read reports of actual games that are either pure moves or are written in a romanticised style, but still educational and completely factual.
I agree with you! This is exactly what I was asking, thank you. I think I'm on the right track then with my writing. I don't force feed the reader chess and I had one reviewer say "the chess parts are accurate." If you decide to read my books, I'd like to hear what you thought.
@ Lyudmil, Well, movies aren't really the point. Can you not name any significant novels within the last 100 years?
I have VERY BIG difficulties with this one.
Would like that a name comes to my mind, but it just does not.
Well, Asimov, Foundation, the downfall of the Earrth into the abyss of timelessness and creative sterility.