any advice bout this game

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arrowhead13

i won so this is for my friend. but could i have done better?

1. d3 e5
2. b4 Bxb4+
3. Nc3 Bxc3+
4. Bd2 Bxa1
5. Qxa1 d6
6. Qd1 Nf6
7. Nf3 O-O
8. Ba5 b6
9. Kd2 bxa5
10. e3 Bg4
11. g3 e4
12. c4 exf3
13. Qe1 Re8
14. h4 Re6
15. h5 Nxh5
16. Rxh5 Bxh5
17. Bh3 Re5
18. Bc8 Qxc8
19. a4 Nc6
20. Kc3 Rb8
21. Kd2 Rb2+
22. Kd1 Rb1+
23. Kc2 Rxe1
24. Kc3 Qb8
25. e4 Rf1
26. d4 Rg5
27. Kd2 Rxf2+
28. Kd3 Qb3#

any help is nice

Streptomicin

Next time post it like this. And please, do not post games like this here ever again. My dog could play better then white.

johnkorean

12... Bxf3

hmcgrier

25...Qb4+  26.Kc2...Nd4mate

Niggles

absolutely louzy game

myah

Wow everyone who posted before me was absolutely spot on in their analysis!

ARROWHEAD13 you had moves 2-7 handed to you. I'm sure about 99.999% of players would have played those same moves, so whatever.

Move 8 is a bit sub-par already! Better than 8. b3 is 8. Nc6 as you develop a piece and force White to lose a tempo at the same time, putting you up a full turn.

Move 12 is also another mistake, but by the time you play 12. exf3 you have about a 0.001% chance of losing this game, so it doesn't really matter what you do after that.

Studying moves 8 and 12 should give you some idea of how you need to improve.

arrowhead13
Streptomicin wrote:

Next time post it like this. And please, do not post games like this here ever again. My dog could play better then white.


 ok, i dont know how to do the game like that. and why cant i post games like this. i know my friend was bad,

Streptomicin

What advice do you expect to get? You could just move your pieces around the board not attacking anything, and you would still win. After 4 moves he was down for a Rook, Knight and a pawn. That is 4 moves. No point analizing that kind of game, and for your friend, only advice is to sit on his hands before he moves.

RosarioVampire

12...Bxf3, i prefer 19...Qb7 Qa1 20.Nc6 (even though he probably wouldnt even think of Qa1), and any other improvements i could possibly find would stem from u playing a forced mate.