Stranger On The Train
As I made my way to London
From Glasgow fair aboard a train,
An old man asked “Beg your pardon,
May I sit as you play your game?”
Said I “Of course, be my guest;
I'm just reliving glories past.”
He took a seat at this behest
And watched my analytic tasks.
So silent sat, such stark stillness,
I quite forgot his presence there;
That when he spoke next, I confess
I nearly jumped out of my chair.
“You moved the rook there, bringing threat,
But was it not better to wait?
A little move along instead
And wasn't that three more till mate?”
I nearly called him fool and more;
(I'd played this through on many nights)
What chance was there I'd missed before
So often what he'd seen first sight?
But as I looked upon his face,
I saw a fleeting, nervous smile;
Choking down scorn I had embraced,
I saw he was right all the while!
With new respect I viewed the man,
Whose image changed before my eyes
From sad figure felled by Time's hand
To elder sage, clever and wise.
I could not speak, could only bow
My head to acknowledge his mind;
What good fortune brought me here now,
That such a gifted soul I'd find?
I asked him then if he would give
Pleasure and honour of a game.
His eyes lit up and start we did;
His eagerness made me feel shame:
Had I suggested play from first!
Who knows what wonders I had missed.
He'd woke in me chess-player's thirst,
What better time could I have wished?
We savoured first a Spanish dance,
With intricate manoeuvring;
As pieces flicked forth from his hands
I could not help my wondering:
“Pray tell, dear sir, what is your name?”
He answered “Joseph Bramkovich.”
“Where did you learn this precious game?”
“When but a boy in home Munich.”
He won that game with style and flair
And offered me a rematch then.
I gladly took proposal there,
For chance like this won't come again.
A Dragon now and with his touch
The beast seemed to have come awake;
I charged and fought like George but such
A foe was more than I could take.
“Please, one more game!” I begged of him,
Herr Bramkovich nodded assent.
He played some moves then on a whim
He seemed to go still and silent.
What subtle ploys did he weigh up?
What nuances went through his brain?
But slow he toppled, spilling cups,
A cold dead stranger on the train.
Murder?
No, he was old. Us old guys just die for no apparent reason.
Thanks, streetfighter. Yes, its mine - all the stuff on my page is mine - thirty odd pieces - poetry, prose and puzzles - feel free to browse.
Not sure anyone would notice anyway but I have changed seven lines. Was reading through some of my old stuff and surprised at just how badly worded some of it was. Oh well, you live and learn.
Stranger On The Train
As I made my way to London
From Glasgow fair aboard a train,
An old man asked “Beg your pardon,
May I sit as you play your game?”
Said I “Of course, be my guest;
I'm just reliving glories past.”
He took a seat at this behest
And watched my analytic tasks.
So silent sat, such stark stillness,
I quite forgot his presence there;
That when he spoke next, I confess
I nearly jumped out of my chair.
“You moved the rook there, bringing threat,
But was it not better to wait?
A little move along instead
And wasn't that three more till mate?”
I nearly called him fool and more;
(I'd played this through on many nights)
What chance was there I'd missed before
So often what he'd seen first sight?
But as I looked upon his face,
I saw a fleeting, nervous smile;
Choking down scorn I had embraced,
I saw he was right all the while!
With new respect I viewed the man,
Whose image changed before my eyes
From sad figure felled by Time's hand
To elder sage, clever and wise.
I could not speak, could only bow
My head to acknowledge his mind;
What good fortune brought me here now,
That such a gifted soul I'd find?
I asked him then if he would give
Pleasure and honour of a game.
His eyes lit up and start we did;
His eagerness made me feel shame:
Had I suggested play from first!
Who knows what wonders I had missed.
He'd woke in me chess-player's thirst,
What better time could I have wished?
We savoured first a Spanish dance,
With intricate manoeuvring;
As pieces flicked forth from his hands
I could not help my wondering:
“Pray tell, dear sir, what is your name?”
He answered “Joseph Bramkovich.”
“Where did you learn this precious game?”
“When but a boy in home Munich.”
He won that game with style and flair
And offered me a rematch then.
I gladly took proposal there,
For chance like this won't come again.
A Dragon now and with his touch
The beast seemed to have come awake;
I charged and fought like George but such
A foe was more than I could take.
“Please, one more game!” I begged of him,
Herr Bramkovich nodded assent.
He played some moves then on a whim
He seemed to go still and silent.
What subtle ploys did he weigh up?
What nuances went through his brain?
But slow he toppled, spilling cups,
A cold dead stranger on the train.