Stranger On The Train

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 Stranger On The Train

 

As I made my way to London

From Glasgow fair aboard a train,

An old man asked “Beg your pardon,

May I sit as you play your game?”

Said I “Of course, be my guest;

I'm just reliving glories past.”

He took a seat at this behest

And watched my analytic tasks.

 

So silent sat, such stark stillness,

I quite forgot his presence there;

That when he spoke next, I confess

I nearly jumped out of my chair.

“You moved the rook there, bringing threat,

But was it not better to wait?

A little move along instead

And wasn't that three more till mate?”

 

I nearly called him fool and more;

(I'd played this through on many nights)

What chance was there I'd missed before

So often what he'd seen first sight?

But as I looked upon his face,

I saw a fleeting, nervous smile;

Choking down scorn I had embraced,

I saw he was right all the while!

 

With new respect I viewed the man,

Whose image changed before my eyes

From sad figure felled by Time's hand

To elder sage, clever and wise.

I could not speak, could only bow

My head to acknowledge his mind;

What good fortune brought me here now,

That such a gifted soul I'd find?

 

I asked him then if he would give

Pleasure and honour of a game.

His eyes lit up and start we did;

His eagerness made me feel shame:

Had I suggested play from first!

Who knows what wonders I had missed.

He'd woke in me chess-player's thirst,

What better time could I have wished?

 

We savoured first a Spanish dance,

With intricate manoeuvring;

As pieces flicked forth from his hands

I could not help my wondering:

“Pray tell, dear sir, what is your name?”

He answered “Joseph Bramkovich.”

“Where did you learn this precious game?”

“When but a boy in home Munich.”

 

He won that game with style and flair

And offered me a rematch then.

I gladly took proposal there,

For chance like this won't come again.

A Dragon now and with his touch

The beast seemed to have come awake;

I charged and fought like George but such

A foe was more than I could take.

 

“Please, one more game!” I begged of him,

Herr Bramkovich nodded assent.

He played some moves then on a whim

He seemed to go still and silent.

What subtle ploys did he weigh up?

What nuances went through his brain?

But slow he toppled, spilling cups,

A cold dead stranger on the train.

Here_Is_Plenty
--a wrote:

Murder?


 No, he was old.  Us old guys just die for no apparent reason.

Here_Is_Plenty

Thanks, streetfighter.  Yes, its mine - all the stuff on my page is mine - thirty odd pieces - poetry, prose and puzzles - feel free to browse.

Here_Is_Plenty

Not sure anyone would notice anyway but I have changed seven lines.  Was reading through some of my old stuff and surprised at just how badly worded some of it was.  Oh well, you live and learn.