Winner646 wrote:
Midsummer night's dream
Dashed and I saw stars, blinking
Signals end of love
Breakup haiku (hope it is a haiku tho)
Your creativity is good but you are not following the syllables rule
Your eyes are fire.
Their image burnt into my soul,
Scarred by beauty am now a fool.
The last line was intentional lol
Noice but sadly not a haiku
Too many syllables
Yeah sadly he is right but I will surely make it my whatsaap status