I would like feed back on a four player variant I made

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The main goal and how to win is to defeat the zombie and get your kings to safety I would like some more advice on what I should do for this idea. but please give me ideas and help me improve my idea.

example game

1. f2-f4 .. c4-e4=A .. f10-f8 .. m5-k5
2. f4-f5=X .. c9-e9=A .. Qg11xAe9 .. m8-k8
3. g2-g4 .. c8-e8=A .. Qe9xAe8 .. k8-j8=V
4. g4-g5=A .. Ae4xQe8 .. g10-g9 .. Vj8-h7
5. e2-e4 .. Ae8-d8 .. f8-f6 .. Vh7xAg5
6. e4-e5=A .. c7-e7=A .. f6xVg5 .. m3-k3
7. Qg1xg5 .. Ae7xQg5 .. h10-g10=A .. k5-j5=A
8. h2-h4 .. Ag5xh4 .. Ag10-j7 .. Aj5xAh4
9. Ae5-f6 .. Ad8-c9 .. Aj7xBb7+ .. Rn8xGb8
10. Af6xAc9 .. a6xAb7 .. Bi11-h10 .. Qn5-g5
11. Ac9-d8+ .. c6-c7 .. e10-e9 .. Qg5-f6+
12. j2-j3 .. Ia8-c6 .. e9-e7 .. Qf6xe7
13. Ad8xQe7 .. a7xRb8 .. Re11xAe7 .. Ah4xRe7
14. Re1xAe7 .. Qb5xBf1 .. Bf11xb7 .. k3-k4
15. Bi1xc7+ .. b8xBc7 .. Bh10-j8 .. m6-k6
16. Re7-e9 .. Rb9xRe9 .. Bj8xBn4 .. Rn3xBn4
17. Rj1-j2 .. c7-e7=A .. Fh11-g10 .. k6-j6=A
18. Kf14xe13 .. c5-e5=A .. Rj11-f11 .. k4-j4=A
19. Ke13xd13 .. c3-e3=A .. Rf11-e11 .. m7-k7
20. Fh1-g2 .. Re9xRe11 .. Fg10-f9 .. k7-j7=A
21. Fg2xQf1 .. Ae7xRj2 .. Bb7xIc6 .. Aj7-b7+#
22. Kd13xc13 .. Bc6xAb7 .. Ra9xa13
23. Kc13-b12 .. Kj14xj13 .. Ra13-a12+
24. Kb12xRa12 .. Bb7-c8 .. Kh14xg14
25. Ka12-b11 .. Kj13xi13 .. Kg14-f14
26. i2-i3 .. Bc8-a10+ .. Aj6xj10
27. Kb11xBa10 .. i10-i9 .. Aj10-j9
28. Ka10-b9 .. g9-g7 .. Re11-e9+
29. Kb9-a8 .. Ff9-e8 .. Re9xFe8+
30. Ka8-a7 .. g7-g5 .. Ae3xKb6+
31. Ka7xAb6 .. Ki13xh13 .. Re8-e7
32. Kb6-a6 .. Kh13xi14 .. Aj9-j6+#
33. g5-g3 .. Kf14-e13
34. g3-g1 .. Ke13-d13
35. g1-h1 .. Kd13-c13
36. i9-i7 .. Aj6xi7
37. k10-k8 .. Kc13-b12
38. k8-j8 .. Kb12-a11
39. j8xAi7 .. Re7xi7
40. Ki14-j14 .. Ka11-a10
41. Kj14xk14 .. Ka10-a9
42. Kk14xk13 .. Ka9-a8
43. Kk13xl13 .. Ka8-a7
44. Kl13xm13 .. Ka7xKa6
45. Km13xKm12 .. Ka6xa5
46. Km12xKm11 .. Ka5xa4
47. Km11xKn11 .. Ka4xa3
48. Kn11xKn12 .. Ka3xa2
49. Kn12xn13 .. Ka2xKa1#

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Use the position workshop thread

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CzarnyResorak567 wrote:

Use the position workshop thread

huh?

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AxleRaxle wrote:
CzarnyResorak567 wrote:

Use the position workshop thread

huh?

I told you last time. There's a workshop thread that is both pinned and in the club directory.

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like is it good tho?

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AxleRaxle wrote:

like is it good tho?

idk

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AxleRaxle wrote:

like is it good tho?

1. You need to use the position workshop thread instead of making an entire new forum to notify 10000+ members. Please post your position here: https://www.chess.com/clubs/forum/view/new-position-workshop-testing-thread

2. Post your position in the thread because it helps you collect better feedback from the best creators. Here is the link again: https://www.chess.com/clubs/forum/view/new-position-workshop-testing-thread

3. You haven't shown the position at all, so we don't exactly know how the variant looks like.

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what do u mean

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