it looks nice!
NCP - The Eyes of Horus

It seems your posting has not met the minimum requirements for submission, detailed in this thread. Please complete the following requirements:
- Which gamerules apply, including promotion rank and options.
- The time control you think best suits your position.


I think I did everything right...could it be the underline/bold?
It was because you listed "Teams" as a gamerule. I've edited that out for you now.
The other issue is that if you want 2|1 to be the time control, you need to test it. Only 4 of your games use 2|1 (we require 5).
Just a hit for the future, you can mouse over the text in @CGA's response to see what the problems:
also he wants you to say teams in the gamerules as the default is FFA
Is it a "He?" I didn't think it polite to ask =]

I like this. At first I dont see anything bad with position, but maybe 10+ is too many checkes
Not really, because you are probably going to get mated before you run out of checks lol



Title: The Eyes of Horus
Gamerules: KOTH, 10-check, Promotion to KN, Promotion on the 5th rank
Time Control: 2|1
Description: The Eyes of Horus will gleam upon you, waiting for you to bring home victory. Fight the enemies to the death!
Games (Note that they may be out of the order in which they were played):
And here are some bullet games we played in order to test whether the time control (2|1) would work or not:
Notes: A large thanks to @P_K_R_M, @Automaton_Dragon, @sdfffffffffffssdd, @TheOGflame, @qilp, @noahfavelo, @Cyprian2206, @nitrotypess, @A_N_E_W, @treebros, @ScatteredWealth, @KingNelson17, @SuspiciousSquid, @stachusiu, and @SQ77 for helping to test this NCP!
Do you read the Kane Chronicles?

Keep up the good work, we are looking forward to see your new creations!

Gamerules: KOTH, 10-check, Promotion to KN, Promotion on the 5th rank
Time Control: 2|1
Description: The Eyes of Horus will gleam upon you, waiting for you to bring home victory. Fight the enemies to the death!
Games (Note that they may be out of the order in which they were played):
Game 1
Game 2
Game 3
Game 4
Game 5
Game 6
Game 7
Game 8
And here are some bullet games we played in order to test whether the time control (2|1) would work or not:
Game 9
Game 10
Game 11
Game 12
Game 13
Notes: A large thanks to @P_K_R_M, @Automaton_Dragon, @sdfffffffffffssdd, @TheOGflame, @qilp, @noahfavelo, @Cyprian2206, @nitrotypess, @A_N_E_W, @treebros, @ScatteredWealth, @KingNelson17, @SuspiciousSquid, @stachusiu, and @SQ77 for helping to test this NCP!