NCP-The Gatekeepers (Revised)

Fen 4:
R-0,0,0,0-0,0,0,0-0,0,0,0-0,0,0,0-0-{'lives'7,7,7,7)}-
3,yK,yQ,yH,3,X,X,3/
3,yδ,yδ,yδ,2,X,X,4/
5,X,X,X,X,5/
X,3,X,1,X,X,4,gδ,gK/
X,X,2,X,X,yC,X,X,X,X,1,gδ,gQ/
1,X,X,1,X,X,2,X,X,1,X,gδ,gH/
2,X,X,X,4,gC,X,X,2/
2,X,X,bC,4,X,X,X,2/
bH,bδ,X,1,X,X,2,X,X,1,X,X,1/
bQ,bδ,1,X,X,X,X,rC,X,X,2,X,X/
bK,bδ,4,X,X,1,X,3,X/
5,X,X,X,X,5/
4,X,X,2,rδ,rδ,rδ,3/
3,X,X,3,rH,rQ,rK,3

Rules: Koth, MG at 6th rank, 7 checks, 1 min 5 second increment time control. ox2

Changes from the last version.
Changed rooks into camels because rooks didn't work well enough, and they are just stuck in the center disk, changed promotion to general and grasshopper. changed knight into hawk so you still have a few powerful pieces. Changed time control to be a little faster.
Ox2 stops a bit of teaming, and 7 checks to make winning a bit easier.

Games:
https://www.chess.com/4-player-chess?g=7753058
I changed position because it was a bit too clunky with the generals I had in the center.
https://www.chess.com/4-player-chess?g=7791851
https://www.chess.com/4-player-chess?g=7791960
https://www.chess.com/4-player-chess?g=7792069
https://www.chess.com/4-player-chess?g=7792232
https://www.chess.com/4-player-chess?g=7792424
https://www.chess.com/4-player-chess?g=7797222
https://www.chess.com/4-player-chess?g=7812246
https://www.chess.com/4-player-chess?g=7812403
https://www.chess.com/4-player-chess?g=7812550

Transparent walls please

???

Looks better

Thanks for the revision!

better than last

decline this i have a better version now.,

We see that you've decided to improve on this position regardless of what we decided, which is admirable. Here are some suggestions which you may use to fine-tune the next version of your position.

You've definitely made improvements relative to the last iteration of your position. With the slightly weaker promotion pieces, it is now possible to defend against attacks. However, once all pawns are promoted, it is difficult to make progress because an attack usually requires 2-3 pieces, which would leave you open to an attack from your flank. If you still want to work on this position, you need to add some significant defensive capabilities (possibly more blocking walls or some pawns that cannot promote and would be used as shelter or a minor piece) while also making attacking less linear. Currently, you can only attack by moving pieces into your left flank's territory, almost always generals. By far the easiest way to do this is getting rid of some walls. Good luck revising your position.

Hads some transparent walls