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kuttiecc

Fit

Here I sit,

At Least I'm not throwing a fit.

          Charlene Louise Carradine

Baranor

Here's one I wrote a while ago :-)

 

 

If one and one are two and two and one and two are three,
Then what, in heaven's name, does math have to do with me?

CapCloud

Cute... but the meter and the math don't add up. Typo or test? Or did King Arthur from Monty Python write it? ("Three!",    "Five, Sir...",      "Five!")

billgill0

When using words to make a rhyme,

it shows if one has taken time,

tis obvious to you and I,.....I think

twas written quicker than your eye... can blink!

Baranor

Heya CapCloud,

True. There is no reason for it to add up. :-)

csharpe

posted this elsewhere:

       May Fly

A fly that lives
     for but a day
shall, over breakfast.
     not delay                             csharpe

billgill0

A man that pulls apart a rhyme,

the poet should he tell?

well yes, I guess he maybe this time,

but, make sure you can SPELL !!!

Kevindubrow

A man who spells,
Is a man who tells,
The others that they're wrong.

A man who can't,
recieves a rant,
And is placed where he belongs.

billgill0

When using words in poetry,

there are some rules, you fail to see

accents from a foriegn land

are very hard to understand.

so if you  plan to right a wrong

then write in rhyme, as in a song !

Kevindubrow

There can't be rules in poetry,
That's the one realm where there's none.
Uptight rules and arrogant fools,
Take out all the fun.

billgill0

If offended by my rhymes, oppoligies are due,

I too find that words are fun, so I agree with you,

shows charactor to stand ones ground, my head is bowed dear Sir,

to members from around the World, for my unfounded slur!

Kevindubrow

Apologies not needed, friend.
All rhymes delight, amuse.
There's no need at all, my man,
To be stricken by the Blues.

csharpe

we poets battle with our words
we make them stand up proud
but when it comes to sweet romance,
two's company; three's a crowd



kuttiecc

It would be alright if ya'll could make some sense,

Most of what I read just sounds dense.

If there is no rhyme,

Then why waste my time?

Kevindubrow

"Rhyme/time"? That's not unique.
Think of something much less bleak.
That's way too meek, way too weak.
Of poet's clichésthat's the most antique.

kuttiecc

So, you thought it was to weak,

What is it that would make you proud?

Because right now I just think you are a cow.

What is it that you think is not bleak?

Kevindubrow

Anything but that rhyme. Maybe cool/fool too.

kuttiecc

What exactly are you asking of me?

Because I am finding it hard to see.

Are you looking for alittle catch?

Then I sugest that you step and fetch.

MINTAKASTAR

quisiera ser poeta

pero no riman mis poemas

sin embargo le escribo al

sol y a la luna una hermosa

poesia, cancion de amor

y desamor,  vida gloriosa,

y hasta de terror...

MINTAKASTAR

What about in spanish eh?